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2024-06-04 02:31

It seemed good, the typical author who thinks they are better than hired comic writers, which is technically true but also the authors are looking at comics extremely superficially and reaching the same conclusion which is annoying. Anyway, the fanfic goes into debate lording really quick and mc stumps superman in the marketplace of ideas, so cool! When the author didn’t want to think of how the argument would actually go and simply wrote “then everyone clapped and Albert Einstein gave me 40$” I thought that the author was just the same type of cancer of comic book writers

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Daoist_Dan
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As long as he's not cuckolding the hero or making them psychopaths and f you for thinking they were heroes or saying actually they're brown and female and disabled now then they're doing a lot better than modern comic writers. Seriously. That's a loooooow bar currently.

Daoist_Dan
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Half of them are insincere freaks who don't want to write the stories they're on.

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