Jerry070

Thanks for the chapter

Not the pace of story but this cultivation thing is progressing slow (not really a problem) but also being repetitive.

Its getting boring with the qi sensing thing. Like not even that but same thing again and again is becoming repetitive. Atleast let him travel or somthing, stuck in a sect with no development than just him trying to get minecraft anvil and some farming?

Thanks for the chapter

Chinese fanfics

Doesn't really need that much skills. Just add drama to the mix, and control it to a size that it doesn't effect the progression. Only thing important is knowing when to stop. And, if that drama is fun (this needs skill) then, well you got the chapter of those two sentences.

Everyone will learn it now lol

Anyways, thanks for the chapter.

Guy is going to regret not acquiring it. Bro after series release be like:

Translator – nice job improving the quality. Anyways, this is for those who don't like Chinese novels' setting where they kill unnecessarily. I am not sure if it will happen, but fair warning in this review. While the translator has done a good job, he can't remove the mentality with which the author made this story. That's how it works for most Chinese authors. They have the same logic: 1. I am not strong, can't save myself — just because they are strong they are bullying the weak. 2. I am strong so you will die this is strong survive weak die world. (Contradicting the first; being hypocrite.) 3. Well he is my relative, you tried to kill him so you are evil to the world. (Same in case of tang san.) 4. Authors of these books try to morally correct the decision by making the plot of that person opposite to mc actually evil, so all hypocritical choices of mc look good or not evil. Anyways, I will read further to check if this mc is a generic Chinese cultivation story mc or not. If it is good, I will change my review. In soul land when 100k soul beast changes to human as kids, they act like kids too, that means their mentality is also changed. So if we take that point, mc is ready to kill a child for his benefit. But, well at least we can know from his mentality in these chapters, he is a ruthless guy who will do anything to gain power if he has the chance. While he hasn't done it yet, he is thinking of doing it. Only later chapters will prove that, so don't take my review as a final point for the novel and read it yourself, as even this review might change based on how the novel progresses. Anyways, till now the translator is doing good only by improving reading quality for us, so nice work to you man.