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Lucas_Oliveira_2302
Lucas_Oliveira_2302Lv11yr
2023-12-22 00:29

The MC will only have one girl, right? because it doesn't have the harem tag which is rare but doesn't mean it's a bad thing, so who will be the lucky one who gets to get the MC?

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Purple123
Purple123Lv2

He is pure energy y would he need a gf He doesn’t have needs he is energy that’s like saying if fire gained the ability to think do u think it would look for love

Lucas_Oliveira_2302
Lucas_Oliveira_2302Lv1

True but this fanfiction has the romance tag so I think he will actually have a girlfriend

Purple123:He is pure energy y would he need a gf He doesn’t have needs he is energy that’s like saying if fire gained the ability to think do u think it would look for love
The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Someone tell me who the interest is once she is official, yes? Thanks

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