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Fuckyall
FuckyallLv141yr
2023-03-15 04:12

This look good. but please don't make it a harem novel

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Svneighter
SvneighterAuthor

Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.

Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

Aye! Aye! lest not get too hasty here, we still have Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata to consider.

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
Fuckyall
FuckyallLv14

I just got bored of reading Harem type ff. in most solo leveling ff the main girl are always Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata. but I think having only Sung Jinah is good

Kono_Timoda:Aye! Aye! lest not get too hasty here, we still have Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata to consider.
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

Which ones, if it is good and well developed, please, share with the class

Fuckyall:I just got bored of reading Harem type ff. in most solo leveling ff the main girl are always Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata. but I think having only Sung Jinah is good
Lycarus
LycarusLv2

when you decide let us know! I don't like to read polygamy/harem, so I'll be grateful to get the warning, as I'm looking for a good Solo leveling story

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
Fuckyall
FuckyallLv14

My Second Life in Another World, In multiverses with Majin Buu’s ability, Superman in Solo Leveling,

Kono_Timoda:Which ones, if it is good and well developed, please, share with the class
Kono_Timoda
Kono_TimodaLv3

I had read those, I didn't like there writing style, the premise or the MC felt too OP from the beginning. I am hoping that this author could do a better Job at it.

Fuckyall:My Second Life in Another World, In multiverses with Majin Buu’s ability, Superman in Solo Leveling,
MuffinDud
MuffinDudLv15

Yeah, because if you want to have the romantic interest to be Sung Jinah and a harem. Then better believe you will see an angry Sung Jinwoo I don't know what your thinking then, he's a protective older brother.

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
ananide
ananideLv14

For once I agree to not doing harem here. You can't have our lord's sister to be someone's pokemon.

I_LOVE_MEGUMIN
I_LOVE_MEGUMINLv11

Please no harem

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
Azathoth2
Azathoth2Lv4

Noharem please 🥺

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
Valkirye402
Valkirye402Lv2

no harem pls

aceZ0
aceZ0Lv4

Just believe in yourself dont listen to these losers who found subpar works and kept crying over it. Just write what you want and dont listen to wn readers(lol). If theyre dissatisfied bcs of how things happened in other subpar work it doesnt mean it wouldnt happen to this fic too. Good luck author

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
AsianLadyBoy
AsianLadyBoyLv12

Hey, do what the majority wants its good for business.

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
N_RR
N_RRLv4

Yes bro No Harem!!

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

harem please, i only read a little SL fanfics so yeah I'm okay with it being the harem

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
InfinityAndBeyond
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

2 to 4 are okay

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
ultrahi
ultrahiLv5

please no harem

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
vampgod
vampgodLv4

Kono_Timoda:Aye! Aye! lest not get too hasty here, we still have Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata to consider.
Firesight
FiresightLv14

If you don't make a harem then what dissatisfied you in Solo Leveling that you're making its fanfic? It was almost.

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
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