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FuckyallLv141yr
2023-03-14 20:12

This look good. but please don't make it a harem novel

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SvneighterAuthor

Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.

Kono_TimodaLv3

Aye! Aye! lest not get too hasty here, we still have Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata to consider.

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
FuckyallLv14

I just got bored of reading Harem type ff. in most solo leveling ff the main girl are always Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata. but I think having only Sung Jinah is good

Kono_Timoda:Aye! Aye! lest not get too hasty here, we still have Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata to consider.
Kono_TimodaLv3

Which ones, if it is good and well developed, please, share with the class

Fuckyall:I just got bored of reading Harem type ff. in most solo leveling ff the main girl are always Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata. but I think having only Sung Jinah is good
LycarusLv2

when you decide let us know! I don't like to read polygamy/harem, so I'll be grateful to get the warning, as I'm looking for a good Solo leveling story

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
FuckyallLv14

My Second Life in Another World, In multiverses with Majin Buu’s ability, Superman in Solo Leveling,

Kono_Timoda:Which ones, if it is good and well developed, please, share with the class
Kono_TimodaLv3

I had read those, I didn't like there writing style, the premise or the MC felt too OP from the beginning. I am hoping that this author could do a better Job at it.

Fuckyall:My Second Life in Another World, In multiverses with Majin Buu’s ability, Superman in Solo Leveling,
MuffinDudLv15

Yeah, because if you want to have the romantic interest to be Sung Jinah and a harem. Then better believe you will see an angry Sung Jinwoo I don't know what your thinking then, he's a protective older brother.

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
ananideLv14

For once I agree to not doing harem here. You can't have our lord's sister to be someone's pokemon.

I_LOVE_MEGUMINLv12

Please no harem

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
Lord_HasturLv4

Noharem please 🥺

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
Valkirye402Lv2

no harem pls

aceZ0Lv4

Just believe in yourself dont listen to these losers who found subpar works and kept crying over it. Just write what you want and dont listen to wn readers(lol). If theyre dissatisfied bcs of how things happened in other subpar work it doesnt mean it wouldnt happen to this fic too. Good luck author

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
AsianLadyBoyLv13

Hey, do what the majority wants its good for business.

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
N_RRLv4

Yes bro No Harem!!

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

harem please, i only read a little SL fanfics so yeah I'm okay with it being the harem

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
InfinityAndBeyondLv5

2 to 4 are okay

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
ultrahiLv5

please no harem

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
vampgodLv4

Kono_Timoda:Aye! Aye! lest not get too hasty here, we still have Cha Hae-In and Kanae Tawata to consider.
FiresightLv14

If you don't make a harem then what dissatisfied you in Solo Leveling that you're making its fanfic? It was almost.

Svneighter:Thanks for the review and I am now seriously thinking to change the synopsis and stick to single romance.
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