Review from Chapter 19 My problem with the story is the story telling and how the romance feels very boring to read through. You get these short chapters of interactions between Jin-ah and Haru. Maybe the chemistry between Haru is more of a stalker who is forcing his perception onto Jin-ah and I don't know if that's love or something, but I don't like reading it. I won't say much about the story, but there are a few things I dislike. 1) Something to do with this excessive need to elaborate the way other people see Haru's eyes. I don't want to know about it each chapter just keep it simple. 2) This one is a personal preference but the entire interaction with Jin-woo something about it seems wrong. Haru comes off as too familiar with Jin-woo, but the story telling makes the entire interaction between the two very bland and lifeless to read. Apart from these things. The Author for now is consistent with the uploads which is a good thing for most readers, but I'm more interested in the quality of writing than uploads and the romance... questionable on so many levels, but that's a personal preference. I personally don't read romance stories on here, but if there is one thing I would like to know in a few chapters. 1) The story keeps me reading it. 2) The characters needs to be more than just talking to each-other. 3) I don't care about the plot or plot twists or massive build up. Just make me not want to stop reading. So far although this story is very popular here. I wouldn't read it from chapter 1 again, but thank you for the uploads I understand how hard it is to write chapters.
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