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malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv12yr
2023-03-21 19:25

definitely not the best. but the future is promising. Especially the fact that mc says he loves a woman and writes that he can have a harem in the summary makes this unbearable. I'm going to read this, but I'll probably look and read it in 12 years. 80% of the books will either fall or be left unfinished. still worth a try.

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Svneighter
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Well, you know the pattern and I won't make fake promises like I won't drop since I write fanfic in my free time to get off some stress. But I will do my best to write at least a hundred chapters and pull the story to a decent point. About harem then I am still confused about whether to make it a single romance or add just one another.

Webnovel_Baller
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Please make it a single. Harem sucks. Its not that it makes a story bad, its just that it makes it worse.

Svneighter:Well, you know the pattern and I won't make fake promises like I won't drop since I write fanfic in my free time to get off some stress. But I will do my best to write at least a hundred chapters and pull the story to a decent point. About harem then I am still confused about whether to make it a single romance or add just one another.
AndellOfficial
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He just dropped a chapter saying no harem so it might be a good time to check if you like the progression so you can keep it or get rid of it.

malinizgeldii
malinizgeldiiLv1

I was thinking of going back to the novel. Thanks for the news.

AndellOfficial:He just dropped a chapter saying no harem so it might be a good time to check if you like the progression so you can keep it or get rid of it.
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