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Grammy
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2023-03-14 12:03

Only one chapter so far but it’s quite good in terms of quality I do ask that if possible to not make it a herem but it is your choice anyway keep up the great work👍🏾

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Svneighter
SvneighterAuthor

Thanks for the early review. I will try to maintain the quality and whether it would be harem or not...then it will depend on the audience poll

Grammy
GrammyLv13

May I ask were this poll will be?

Svneighter:Thanks for the early review. I will try to maintain the quality and whether it would be harem or not...then it will depend on the audience poll
Svneighter
SvneighterAuthor

I will put a poll after a certain time. The thing is, if I feel like I have developed romance to a certain extent and doesn't require anyone between them, then I might not harem at all. It all just depends on how I progress the story so just follow the chapters and wait for it~

Grammy:May I ask were this poll will be?
hizer0778
hizer0778Lv14

is the pool done, so I'd it harem?

Svneighter:I will put a poll after a certain time. The thing is, if I feel like I have developed romance to a certain extent and doesn't require anyone between them, then I might not harem at all. It all just depends on how I progress the story so just follow the chapters and wait for it~
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