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Svneighter
SvneighterAuthor1yr
2023-07-04 12:26

I shamelessly tapped on all 5 stars. No holding back there. Anyway, this is my first review of my fiction and I would like to first inform you that this fiction is a solo romance and not a harem. The story is slow paced and I am trying to add as many details as I could so if you like fast-paced stories, I am sorry man but this is not the place. Upload frequency is a little inconsistent but I am working on it so maybe you would see my fiction being refreshed on your homepage more often now. Alright then, that's that. If you have any queries you can comment down here, or ask me on my discord. Peace out.

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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Please don't drop.

Mamdouh_mohamed
Mamdouh_mohamedLv12

Mr. author, please read the comments and delete the negative comments that are meaningless because they reduce the evaluation of the novel for no reason. For example, there is a two-star rating for a person who says that the novel is harem, which it is not, and another comment derives from that Jin-ah does not know that Haru is an orphan even though Her friend knows, that person gave a 2 star rating for no apparent reason other than this pointless complaint, there are only these 2 comments for now and please watch out for this stuff in the future, I read a lot of good ff's that have no readers because of these kind of comments

Svneighter
SvneighterAuthor

Alright. Thanks. And I would be cautious from now on.

Mamdouh_mohamed:Mr. author, please read the comments and delete the negative comments that are meaningless because they reduce the evaluation of the novel for no reason. For example, there is a two-star rating for a person who says that the novel is harem, which it is not, and another comment derives from that Jin-ah does not know that Haru is an orphan even though Her friend knows, that person gave a 2 star rating for no apparent reason other than this pointless complaint, there are only these 2 comments for now and please watch out for this stuff in the future, I read a lot of good ff's that have no readers because of these kind of comments
Ramyboyz15
Ramyboyz15Lv14

Just asking will you put your other works here as well?

Ramyboyz15
Ramyboyz15Lv14

Also couldn’t find your aux chaps for wannabe villain heh

Ramyboyz15:Just asking will you put your other works here as well?
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

u wish I saw that bad comment earlier☹

Mamdouh_mohamed:Mr. author, please read the comments and delete the negative comments that are meaningless because they reduce the evaluation of the novel for no reason. For example, there is a two-star rating for a person who says that the novel is harem, which it is not, and another comment derives from that Jin-ah does not know that Haru is an orphan even though Her friend knows, that person gave a 2 star rating for no apparent reason other than this pointless complaint, there are only these 2 comments for now and please watch out for this stuff in the future, I read a lot of good ff's that have no readers because of these kind of comments
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

ps if you plan to give mc 2 girls just say it at the start instead of putting in the synopsis that there will only be one main heroine bruh. wasted my mood 😒 . how can that obsessed yandere mc get more than one tsk

PUERKO_Senpai
PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

Are there LEMONS??

Svneighter
SvneighterAuthor

N-Not yet but soon...

PUERKO_Senpai:Are there LEMONS??
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DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv14

another fake tag novel then. probably fake op mc as well

Ashborn1609:ps if you plan to give mc 2 girls just say it at the start instead of putting in the synopsis that there will only be one main heroine bruh. wasted my mood 😒 . how can that obsessed yandere mc get more than one tsk
david_444
david_444Lv4

ther is only one

DeathLingers:another fake tag novel then. probably fake op mc as well
david_444
david_444Lv4

ther is only one

Ashborn1609:ps if you plan to give mc 2 girls just say it at the start instead of putting in the synopsis that there will only be one main heroine bruh. wasted my mood 😒 . how can that obsessed yandere mc get more than one tsk
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

go read the last few lines of ch15 and come back

david_444:ther is only one
david_444
david_444Lv4

he chang it back to one

Ashborn1609:go read the last few lines of ch15 and come back
Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

at which chapter does he say that? I want proof

david_444:he chang it back to one
david_444
david_444Lv4

32 or 'not a chapter 2'

Ashborn1609:at which chapter does he say that? I want proof
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Ashborn1609
Ashborn1609Lv4

thanks for the heads!!! this book finally looks readable

david_444:32 or 'not a chapter 2'
Romance_guy
Romance_guyLv14

Does mc make a guild ? If he hasn’t He should please

Svneighter:Alright. Thanks. And I would be cautious from now on.
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DaoistOfeOTA
DaoistOfeOTALv4

Is this that weird author who always has his protags kill a cat or dog at the beginning

Mr_ExtraLover
Mr_ExtraLoverLv4

Hello Author are you by chance the same Author who wrote After rebirth, I confessed to the losing heroine If so I'm going enjoy this fanfic

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ExArgentum
ExArgentumLv14

Solo Leveling: Perception is a webnovel that offers a fresh perspective on the world of Solo Leveling by focusing on Jinah, rather than her older sibling Jin-Woo. While the novel boasts well-written character interactions and good writing quality, it's held back by odd nerfs, slow plot development, and short chapters that leave you thinking, "That's it?" In the story, the protagonist gets to choose his world, and he picks Solo Leveling because he loves Jinah. He's granted three wishes with different restrictions, and wishes for Gojo Satoru's Six Eyes, Tatsuya Shiba's Regrowth, and Kurogane Ikki's Complete Material Martial Artist abilities. Set in Jinah's class in Seoul, the novel introduces the protagonist as a transfer student from Japan who wears a blindfold. Driven by his love for Jinah, his primary goal is to get along with her, rather than jumping into dungeons and fighting. One thing I like about this novel is the character interactions. The dialogue is smooth, and the characters stay true to their personalities, making their conversations enjoyable and genuine. The writing is pretty solid, with the author using third-person narration to show what the characters are thinking and feeling. However, there are issues. The nerfs to the protagonist's abilities are confusing and don't make sense. The focus on Jinah, while refreshing, may require more exploration of the protagonist's development. Additionally, the novel doesn't provide much world-building beyond the combat and situations, which could make it feel less immersive. Another concern is the pacing. The chapters are really short, often with just one main event, and the plot moves incredibly slowly. After 20 chapters, it feels like only a week has gone by in the story, which is frustrating. In conclusion, Solo Leveling: Perception is a webnovel that offers a new perspective on the world of Solo Leveling, enjoyable character interactions, and decent writing. However, the confusing nerfs, short chapters, and slow plot development prevent it from reaching its full potential. With more focus on the protagonist's development, improved pacing, and better world-building, this novel could become a much more enjoyable read.

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