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SvneighterAuthor1yr
2023-07-04 04:26

I shamelessly tapped on all 5 stars. No holding back there. Anyway, this is my first review of my fiction and I would like to first inform you that this fiction is a solo romance and not a harem. The story is slow paced and I am trying to add as many details as I could so if you like fast-paced stories, I am sorry man but this is not the place. Upload frequency is a little inconsistent but I am working on it so maybe you would see my fiction being refreshed on your homepage more often now. Alright then, that's that. If you have any queries you can comment down here, or ask me on my discord. Peace out.

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The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Please don't drop.

Mamdouh_mohamedLv12

Mr. author, please read the comments and delete the negative comments that are meaningless because they reduce the evaluation of the novel for no reason. For example, there is a two-star rating for a person who says that the novel is harem, which it is not, and another comment derives from that Jin-ah does not know that Haru is an orphan even though Her friend knows, that person gave a 2 star rating for no apparent reason other than this pointless complaint, there are only these 2 comments for now and please watch out for this stuff in the future, I read a lot of good ff's that have no readers because of these kind of comments

SvneighterAuthor

Alright. Thanks. And I would be cautious from now on.

Mamdouh_mohamed:Mr. author, please read the comments and delete the negative comments that are meaningless because they reduce the evaluation of the novel for no reason. For example, there is a two-star rating for a person who says that the novel is harem, which it is not, and another comment derives from that Jin-ah does not know that Haru is an orphan even though Her friend knows, that person gave a 2 star rating for no apparent reason other than this pointless complaint, there are only these 2 comments for now and please watch out for this stuff in the future, I read a lot of good ff's that have no readers because of these kind of comments
Ramyboyz15Lv14

Just asking will you put your other works here as well?

Ramyboyz15Lv14

Also couldn’t find your aux chaps for wannabe villain heh

Ramyboyz15:Just asking will you put your other works here as well?
Ashborn1609Lv4

u wish I saw that bad comment earlier☹

Mamdouh_mohamed:Mr. author, please read the comments and delete the negative comments that are meaningless because they reduce the evaluation of the novel for no reason. For example, there is a two-star rating for a person who says that the novel is harem, which it is not, and another comment derives from that Jin-ah does not know that Haru is an orphan even though Her friend knows, that person gave a 2 star rating for no apparent reason other than this pointless complaint, there are only these 2 comments for now and please watch out for this stuff in the future, I read a lot of good ff's that have no readers because of these kind of comments
Ashborn1609Lv4

ps if you plan to give mc 2 girls just say it at the start instead of putting in the synopsis that there will only be one main heroine bruh. wasted my mood 😒 . how can that obsessed yandere mc get more than one tsk

PUERKO_SenpaiLv4

Are there LEMONS??

SvneighterAuthor

N-Not yet but soon...

PUERKO_Senpai:Are there LEMONS??
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DeathLingersLv14

another fake tag novel then. probably fake op mc as well

Ashborn1609:ps if you plan to give mc 2 girls just say it at the start instead of putting in the synopsis that there will only be one main heroine bruh. wasted my mood 😒 . how can that obsessed yandere mc get more than one tsk
david_444Lv4

ther is only one

DeathLingers:another fake tag novel then. probably fake op mc as well
david_444Lv4

ther is only one

Ashborn1609:ps if you plan to give mc 2 girls just say it at the start instead of putting in the synopsis that there will only be one main heroine bruh. wasted my mood 😒 . how can that obsessed yandere mc get more than one tsk
Ashborn1609Lv4

go read the last few lines of ch15 and come back

david_444:ther is only one
david_444Lv4

he chang it back to one

Ashborn1609:go read the last few lines of ch15 and come back
Ashborn1609Lv4

at which chapter does he say that? I want proof

david_444:he chang it back to one
david_444Lv4

32 or 'not a chapter 2'

Ashborn1609:at which chapter does he say that? I want proof
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Ashborn1609Lv4

thanks for the heads!!! this book finally looks readable

david_444:32 or 'not a chapter 2'
Romance_guyLv14

Does mc make a guild ? If he hasn’t He should please

Svneighter:Alright. Thanks. And I would be cautious from now on.
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DaoistOfeOTALv4

Is this that weird author who always has his protags kill a cat or dog at the beginning

Mr_ExtraLoverLv3

Hello Author are you by chance the same Author who wrote After rebirth, I confessed to the losing heroine If so I'm going enjoy this fanfic

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