I am giving the story five stars because ... well everybody seems to do it, and I did it in my last story. Anyway, if you have any comments or criticism let me know. I hope you enjoy this fic...

The story overall is pretty decent, but it has a major flaw that makes it hard for me to want to read. It’s overly descriptive, and by that I mean 99% of the chapters are descriptions about certain things. As well as Harry constantly thinking, which make sure fic a chore to read as it gets boring fast. It took like 15-16 chapters just for him to get the his first class at Hogwarts. And like 13-14 to actually get to Hogwarts itself. The other fanfic this author has suffers from this same problem, which is just a lot (and I mean a LOT) of descriptions, thinking, and world background without anything truly happening. Not to mention the fact that Harry seems like your cliche Emo/loner Mc who is always quiet and super smart and all that. Overall I might continue reading, but if it’s anything like their other fic (which was definitely worse than this one) I probably will not.

I’m writing this review at Chp.22. Thus far the novel has proven to be well written and with a wonderful start to the story. The original canon has been altered, however it is still really good as you can see the original story happening yet our mc having his own adventure within the story. The melody’s of magic is an ingenious idea within this story and I’ve enjoyed it immensely. In regards to the MCs character, I’m still torn between despised and intrigued. You see, our mc is a pacifistic bookworm through and through. While I do enjoy an MC with a handle on his bloodlust and family murdering tendencies, it does get a bit odd when someone attacks you from behind and insults you at any given moment to not return the favour. In any case, there is still room for character development whether good or bad and I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters. Signed The most arrogant of all young masters.

im leaving a mixed review here hoping the author reads it. so far the story seems well paced and well written in terms of language and structure. im pointing out the things marring my reading experiance hoping it helps dont let it detract from your enjoyment of what seems to be a well written tale. however reading up to chapter 15 the story has a distinct feeling of condecension, towards the established lore, world building and plot. instead of just changing what the author wants they keep criticizing the established world building and stating that their version is the one that makes sense over the original. that may not be the intent but it certainly seems to be the effect. another thing that i mind is that the protagonist seems to be one of those transmigrators who looks down upon all the plot and conflicts as a high and mighty voice of reason that cant be bothered with childish politics and looks at all the mysteries and norms of the world as senseless and beneath them. and the character seems to hold most other characters in disdain and acts haughtyt and rude but is facing absolutely no consequences for it. it seems that the author intends for them to be this way. this however conflicts directly with how the author describes the character. on the whole the character seems unconcerned with the world and events and just wants to be a research hobo who is power hungry... to sum ot up this story has forspoken syndrome.... where the protagonists personality ruins your immersion and enjoyment of an otherwise likeable and well made world

Author it seems like you're trying to follow the framwork you set in the beginning and its stopping your novel into becoming something better. Constantly trying to force the cannon with such a big plot twist from the beginning doesnt make any sense when it could be so much better if you let the story progress organically. You have amazing take on magic and the unqiue power mc have, why not focus more on it with occational mix of cannon where he can just help if convinient or ignore it since dumby gonna control the narrative anyway. I'd recommend: Ancient rune professor, mythical journey if you wanna check out other novels that did following the cannon without letting it dictate the flow of story genre.

In this story, there are too many descriptions of what is happening around the main character, I have read all the available chapters at the moment and in this plot 80% of the description of the world background, which in fact is not necessary and only 20% of the plot, plus the main character seems to be some kind of emo loner who only does, that he reads books in a corner alone.

I tried reading this 3-4 times, but i can't do it.. The MC's personality is just so "irritating" to me he is pathetic for an "adult," a pushover, and i am so biased against him that he could just be breathing and i would be here in the comments section berating him for that lol

Things went down hill the moment the diary came into play.