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ArrogantYungMaster
ArrogantYungMasterLv41yr
2023-03-31 16:03

I’m writing this review at Chp.22. Thus far the novel has proven to be well written and with a wonderful start to the story. The original canon has been altered, however it is still really good as you can see the original story happening yet our mc having his own adventure within the story. The melody’s of magic is an ingenious idea within this story and I’ve enjoyed it immensely. In regards to the MCs character, I’m still torn between despised and intrigued. You see, our mc is a pacifistic bookworm through and through. While I do enjoy an MC with a handle on his bloodlust and family murdering tendencies, it does get a bit odd when someone attacks you from behind and insults you at any given moment to not return the favour. In any case, there is still room for character development whether good or bad and I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters. Signed The most arrogant of all young masters.

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Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6

Sounds like the MC is a wuss. You know you can be a pacifist and still defend yourself and loved ones. Wasnt Itachi described as a pacifist and yet he was a ninja and massacred his own family.

Lazygit
LazygitLv4

mc is definitely not a wuss idk why op thinks that. for example (spoiler) when Draco calls Harry's mom a mudblood, harry threatens draco and snatches Draco's wand out of his hand then proceeds to insult him in the middle of the common room

zahir_mulla
zahir_mullaLv4

that puts smile to my face

Lazygit:mc is definitely not a wuss idk why op thinks that. for example (spoiler) when Draco calls Harry's mom a mudblood, harry threatens draco and snatches Draco's wand out of his hand then proceeds to insult him in the middle of the common room
Vixdraconen
VixdraconenLv14

please tell me this isn't a harem

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maskhara
maskharaLv13

im leaving a mixed review here hoping the author reads it. so far the story seems well paced and well written in terms of language and structure. im pointing out the things marring my reading experiance hoping it helps dont let it detract from your enjoyment of what seems to be a well written tale. however reading up to chapter 15 the story has a distinct feeling of condecension, towards the established lore, world building and plot. instead of just changing what the author wants they keep criticizing the established world building and stating that their version is the one that makes sense over the original. that may not be the intent but it certainly seems to be the effect. another thing that i mind is that the protagonist seems to be one of those transmigrators who looks down upon all the plot and conflicts as a high and mighty voice of reason that cant be bothered with childish politics and looks at all the mysteries and norms of the world as senseless and beneath them. and the character seems to hold most other characters in disdain and acts haughtyt and rude but is facing absolutely no consequences for it. it seems that the author intends for them to be this way. this however conflicts directly with how the author describes the character. on the whole the character seems unconcerned with the world and events and just wants to be a research hobo who is power hungry... to sum ot up this story has forspoken syndrome.... where the protagonists personality ruins your immersion and enjoyment of an otherwise likeable and well made world

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