Mehmehmeh

….i hate when you embolden or highlight certain words and names it throws off the reading experience, i honestly don’t even remember what i read because i kept getting distracted by that.

Except if you have anyone examine it you get in trouble for having processed human in a can lol

Or you could have said he was named after a infamous wizard pirate who was brought into the family a long time ago, the infamous Captain Jack sparrow. Maybe have the black pearl as a family heirloom

Me being nitpicking but Walburga Black was a pure blood supremacist and hardcore traditionalist, I highly doubt she would accept a name like that if she had a choice. But J.K. Rowling did break that naming convention with Narcissa by naming her after a flower soo meh.

I know this maybe nitpicking but it’s kinda a common name for the Black family.

Meh this is book is just not for me, it’s too dark and serious with no levity, even the warhammer series has some humor and levity but this book is just bleak.

This is completely AI written with no editing whatsoever. ………………… ……………….. ………………. Why even post an AI written story

Never read the comic just knew in the show he botched it although I heard the comic version is more powerful and a lot more brutal and violent

Meh I think it’s fine, story has been good soo far so I want to see where this goes

From before the last 3 years*