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What a disappointment, I am still at chapter 15, I saw some little red flags and thought I should check the reviews first. Thankfully I did. Guess I am out. Thank you a lot my friend, for taking time to leave this review.

I quit at chapter 20 that girl stole his money and insulted him. Yet he let her work for him after he became a big shot like w. t. f. Everything else seem so be copied form this other novel witch I can't remember it's name although I don't know who copied form who. The system is good but writen poorly most of the time you aren't told the process of using it just given the results. Personally it's a huge letdown but others might like it like this. Every this else is as average as it gets at the very least at chapter 20 there is no huge red flags other.

It's was great at the start. everything looking perfect the Mc had 2 girls Nina and reen then i actually enjoyed it then for some reason the Mc became a Pokémon master at the same time he kept putting too much time and effort in his team and harem seriously they are all useless completely useless. Meh I get it the author just wanted a team based novel thing or something with harem it's his choice it's still looks good so far but definitely not my cup of tea I would of loved he stayed solo and with just 2 lovers since everything else related to his team and harem is forced af the way I see it. Still if you don't mind it then it's a great pick for you.

I actually really like this one great stuff . Just one question how many chapters will it have.

The villain part is just the Mc doing some sadist stuff and the author give you some nonsensical reason for it. Honestly I didn't care about these parts and I didn't care about the MC being a villain or good guy the problem I had is the fact that the main character is stupid as hell. For example he just made a game end level sword and the first thing he did is to go do some face slapping with it even though he is just a normal human. Dude you're asking to be robbed. To be honest even if the main character was forced to show the sowrd to others I would have continued on reading but the problem is he just went to show off on his own he didn't even have a reason to it. the author will give you a reason that he needed some ingredients and he needed to win the first place or something but the problem is he could have just asked or forced the elf elder to get it for him like wtf. I stopped at ch 60 or so simply couldn't keep going. By the way the only reason I commented is the fact that a love a novel with a lot of comments it make easier to judge whether to read or quick from the start

Hello First I really love this novel I don't know if it's just my type or it's just that great. I just wanted to ask how many chapters it will have?