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Solo_BiriBiriBiriLv23yr
2021-05-19 04:45

If you don't like MC being forcefully enslaved and tortured by the heroine candidate then this novel isn't for you. I rate it 5 because although I hate Celine as much as I hated Mineta, Malty and Rachel, the novel deserves attention.

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ElyonAuthor

Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Celine did it for a reason and it will be revealed after the novel had over a hundred chapters. Also, I agree with the names you listed xD! Especially Rachel from Tower of God. Although I want to slap her silly, having these characters bring a certain edge to the story.

TrevorTNTLv15

I've not started to read it yet but I awate the answer :)

Elyon:Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Celine did it for a reason and it will be revealed after the novel had over a hundred chapters. Also, I agree with the names you listed xD! Especially Rachel from Tower of God. Although I want to slap her silly, having these characters bring a certain edge to the story.
Solo_BiriBiriBiriLv2

Keep up the good work, Author-sama!

LawWillOblivionKLv13

The mc became a slave because if debt and the collar already saved his life once

TrevorTNT:I've not started to read it yet but I awate the answer :)
NoSchool_ArcLv10

nice warning , I'm out

ancientwatcherLv15

lol

NoSchool_Arc:nice warning , I'm out
jamesbond12345Lv13

so he has the strongest system but still become a slave

onewhodreamsLv3

Yeah right! REALLY DISSATISFIED HERE author SAN EVEN IF ITS FOR HIS OWN GOOD . WHICH OF THE MC'S HAVEN'T EXPERIENCED HARDSHIPS SO ITS JUST A ANOTHER ONE ! LET HIM FACE IT BUT MAKING HIM A SLAVE IS TOO MUCH

jamesbond12345:so he has the strongest system but still become a slave
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You_me_6195Lv4

so it's not the strongest system

KaitoxpLv4

I did read the author's work and I think the system seems not useful in early chapters (gamer systems seems more useful than this one) ... But I'm sure the title is not a mistake! Maybe 300+ chap we will see the rise of the strongest system. The story is good, it's nice,and enjoyable But if readers who want some a very realistic one then this one is in the lower middle ( not high nor low) . If readers with realistic imagination read this one then I'm sure they will think... 100% mortality rate hehe protagonist will surely die. (sorry I'm got to much imagination). One of my problem about this book is they did say that mc is OP!! But for me nah mc is still not OP. It's like weak to strong (not OP "if they say OP then read some Chinese OP MC and compare it") And for the last {RECOMMENDED}

You_me_6195:so it's not the strongest system
DcamburLv10

I think there are almost no novels with really OP MC who grow weak-to- strong. Like, OP stands for overpowered and is must be done in all directions. So, I consider MC overpowered if they are geniuses who can memorize all from one glance, can outwit who-knows-how-many-years-old-foggeys, develop at a speed much faster than anyone ever can even without any resources on hands and who are lucky to receive some ultimate cheat power. If you, for example, have equals in your age category you can't be considered OP by definition. Seeking for some miracle drug for hundred chapters just to level up is also a no-no in my eyes. Of course, it is just my opinion. The good example of an OP MC is the one who can beat/kill Outer Gods from Lovecraft Universe as a human without any tricks (though it is not quite possible for them even with tricks).

Kaitoxp:I did read the author's work and I think the system seems not useful in early chapters (gamer systems seems more useful than this one) ... But I'm sure the title is not a mistake! Maybe 300+ chap we will see the rise of the strongest system. The story is good, it's nice,and enjoyable But if readers who want some a very realistic one then this one is in the lower middle ( not high nor low) . If readers with realistic imagination read this one then I'm sure they will think... 100% mortality rate hehe protagonist will surely die. (sorry I'm got to much imagination). One of my problem about this book is they did say that mc is OP!! But for me nah mc is still not OP. It's like weak to strong (not OP "if they say OP then read some Chinese OP MC and compare it") And for the last {RECOMMENDED}
KaitoxpLv4

Well yeah you got the point... Well I really want some good story with a OP MC ( I know that mc surely start at the bottom "weak") but what I mean is let me put a example like *one punch man* Saitama start weak and after training- his strong, but in the anime the training got skipped!! So do you get it!!. What I mean about OP MC (novel) in my own understanding is they don't need to write how mc trained (maybe they can write some minimal description but not entirely). I like some Instant OP MC ( training got skipped or not fully mention) cuz if they did put full-time description about how mc trained then it's tag will not OP its weak to strong.

Dcambur:I think there are almost no novels with really OP MC who grow weak-to- strong. Like, OP stands for overpowered and is must be done in all directions. So, I consider MC overpowered if they are geniuses who can memorize all from one glance, can outwit who-knows-how-many-years-old-foggeys, develop at a speed much faster than anyone ever can even without any resources on hands and who are lucky to receive some ultimate cheat power. If you, for example, have equals in your age category you can't be considered OP by definition. Seeking for some miracle drug for hundred chapters just to level up is also a no-no in my eyes. Of course, it is just my opinion. The good example of an OP MC is the one who can beat/kill Outer Gods from Lovecraft Universe as a human without any tricks (though it is not quite possible for them even with tricks).
You_me_6195Lv4

i don't like novel who think the good people only chinese because i feel like i have been brainwash

Kaitoxp:I did read the author's work and I think the system seems not useful in early chapters (gamer systems seems more useful than this one) ... But I'm sure the title is not a mistake! Maybe 300+ chap we will see the rise of the strongest system. The story is good, it's nice,and enjoyable But if readers who want some a very realistic one then this one is in the lower middle ( not high nor low) . If readers with realistic imagination read this one then I'm sure they will think... 100% mortality rate hehe protagonist will surely die. (sorry I'm got to much imagination). One of my problem about this book is they did say that mc is OP!! But for me nah mc is still not OP. It's like weak to strong (not OP "if they say OP then read some Chinese OP MC and compare it") And for the last {RECOMMENDED}
DcamburLv10

Yeah, I kinda see your point... but for me it is still tricky. If MC had to train really hard(harder than others), then even if his training is skipped, he will not be OP for me, cuz he got what he deserved for his efforts. Saitama literally trained so hard that he got bald xD (just a joke, he is of course OP).

Kaitoxp:Well yeah you got the point... Well I really want some good story with a OP MC ( I know that mc surely start at the bottom "weak") but what I mean is let me put a example like *one punch man* Saitama start weak and after training- his strong, but in the anime the training got skipped!! So do you get it!!. What I mean about OP MC (novel) in my own understanding is they don't need to write how mc trained (maybe they can write some minimal description but not entirely). I like some Instant OP MC ( training got skipped or not fully mention) cuz if they did put full-time description about how mc trained then it's tag will not OP its weak to strong.
KaitoxpLv4

Well in our point of view it's a racism but in chinese point of view it's not.... It's not our fault nor the Chinese fault but it's the government who educate racism. (pls correct me if I'm wrong "I accept others opinions").

You_me_6195:i don't like novel who think the good people only chinese because i feel like i have been brainwash
Rana_Naveed_AhmedLv3

Thanks for the information. i was just about to start reading it. but now i know to not read it.

zen20Lv4

nice save, saw the first comment and was about to start 😥

BusinessManLv4

Who doesnt want to torture rachel endlessly.

Elyon:Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Celine did it for a reason and it will be revealed after the novel had over a hundred chapters. Also, I agree with the names you listed xD! Especially Rachel from Tower of God. Although I want to slap her silly, having these characters bring a certain edge to the story.
NihirvanaLv13

what I wanna know is, is she gonna die if not this ain't for me I'm tired of these characters being forgiven

Elyon:Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. Celine did it for a reason and it will be revealed after the novel had over a hundred chapters. Also, I agree with the names you listed xD! Especially Rachel from Tower of God. Although I want to slap her silly, having these characters bring a certain edge to the story.
WangaLv13

Nothing happens to her, all is forgiven. He was happy to have his consent removed and has very little resentment at becoming a slave for years or watching them torture his adoptive mother. The worst part being that the person who betrayed his trust, tortured him and his mother is gonna be a future waifu. He does plan on getting her back... However it has just become some weird flirty thing between them.

Nihirvana:what I wanna know is, is she gonna die if not this ain't for me I'm tired of these characters being forgiven
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