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ElyonAuthor3yr
2021-04-02 03:07

Shameless author here, giving myself a shameless review. If you are looking for a story with Funny MC Beautiful Girls. Fluff Comedy Action. Adventure Romance. Game Elements System Reincarnation Ecchi Scenes Pure Awesomeness And one of a kind Epicness then this is the story that you are looking for! Open the pages that will bring you to a world where adventure runs wild and free. Follow William as he embarks on a journey to live the life that he had always longed for in his dreams.

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ErjasDLv13

Harem?

LyrikerLv14

Pls answer the questions is this a harem story

ElyonAuthor

Yes

Lyriker:Pls answer the questions is this a harem story
Dev_Rez000Lv4

No harem yet, but *spoiler* he does get the Harem God's divinity...

Lyriker:Pls answer the questions is this a harem story
MAIDENLESSLv1

no op mc? then its trash

ElyonAuthor

Come here mister. Let's talk.

MAIDENLESS:no op mc? then its trash
MAIDENLESSLv1

what

Elyon:Come here mister. Let's talk.
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Regina_AmetLv2

Can you please not do a harem? There are too many harems already!

ThighLoverLv3

Go on scribblehub or go on to a story with a no harem tag

Regina_Amet:Can you please not do a harem? There are too many harems already!
ltsArcaneLv2

"Fluff"? Aight lemme read

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

Is mc gonna be a dense clusterfk !?? no offense... just wanted to know...

ElyonAuthor

what I hate the most are dense mc

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:Is mc gonna be a dense clusterfk !?? no offense... just wanted to know...
MAIDENLESSLv1

do you watch some weird animal hentai? or why do you love goats so much lol.

ElyonAuthor

Ah I see, so you are one of those uncultured people who hadn't heard of Cocogoat. sucks to be you.

MAIDENLESS:do you watch some weird animal hentai? or why do you love goats so much lol.
ElyonAuthor

There's a reason why Goat is called Goats and that is G = Greatest O = Of A = All T = Time

MAIDENLESS:do you watch some weird animal hentai? or why do you love goats so much lol.
MAIDENLESSLv1

you are weird

Elyon:There's a reason why Goat is called Goats and that is G = Greatest O = Of A = All T = Time
ElyonAuthor

thank you.

MAIDENLESS:you are weird
Mark_Muturi_6111Lv13

My brother!!!!!😭😭where have you been all my life?

Elyon:Yes
LordFangYuanLv4

On the brightest day, on the densest night Evil will succumb before my presence All who worship evil will grieve When the power of the harem faces!

Elyon:thank you.
ElyonAuthor

for a moment I t that you were chanting one of the spells in my story xD

LordFangYuan:On the brightest day, on the densest night Evil will succumb before my presence All who worship evil will grieve When the power of the harem faces!
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EldotLv15

TLDR: This is one of the best novels I have ever read. If you are comfortable with all of the tags on this book, I strongly urge you to read it as well. Long Version: At 501 chapters as of reviewing this work, this is one of the best written, planned, and executed novels I have ever read. While action, systems, magic, abilities, romance, love, and harems can be difficult to write well this is a master craft in not only exectuing all of them, but combining them into a tale that is funny, heartwarming, fear inducing, and constantly evolving. The 18+ sections and potentially traumatic sections are marked well so that people not interested can skip them without missing too much context, while used effectively to inform the reader about characters moral such as those who do and do not ask for consent in romantic and sexual moments. The characters are rich and three dimensional, ever character of importance has goals, dreams, and acts based upon them rather than being only plot devices. It feels like a developed world that we are just following this protagonist through. Each battle has a purpose, every person has a role to play, however short, and theg come together to create a story unlike any I have read. The fights, abilities, and system are some of the best as well. They make sense in context of use, fights are one by picking good strategies and taking risks as necessary. Growth is observed Often through battles as well as time skips to center on the most important moments. This is to the stories credit, as some novels feel extra long to make more money when barely anything happens or changes from the readers perspective. This novel has every word count, they all are important to the story whether for laughs, or to inspire awe. I have never felt that my money was spent for nothing. However that does not mean that the author barrels through things, rather they take their time at the moments that matter, and allow characters room to breathe, grow, and understand their relationships. There are very few novels I have read throughout my life that I hold this esteem for, and most of them are fantasy classics. If after reading this review you are still unsure I urge you to at least try the free chapters, and see if it is for you. I truly hope you enjoy this book, and that you grow to love it just as much as I do. I will be sure to update this every 500 chapters or so as long as I am reading. Thank you, author, for this book, and looking forward to reading more!

equinoticLv13

unfortunately, i feel like i have wasted my time reading this, and most of this review will probably be what i dislike about this great novel. a great beginning, that will probably hook in most who like this genre, showing interesting characters as the story goes on. as Will (MC) becomes older, more of the world is revealed, but not explored beyond "this is this, and that is that." although it feels slow-paced, the author is constantly releasing chapters. however, sometimes the writing feels muddy and repetitive, but i think those moments became rarer as i continued reading. i think many people will probably like this story with the exception of a few things like Will's shepherd class, Celine in general, and maybe Will's character. all the way until the tldr at the end are spoilers, so skip if you don't want those. i don't like Celine, mainly because her character is defined as "yandere crazy, but is actually a good person at heart." in the first few chapters she is shown, her only redeeming action was helping Lont. right before she enslaves Will as the price because he was the one to interrupt her experiment. she goes to torture him for the sake of his training and building resistance to dark magic. his reaction is: "She is a good person." Will's only mention of resentment is a single sentence and is only "a little bit." basically, she never looks or seems like a good person, because she never does anything to warrant that besides random thoughts where she sympathizes with Will. an unlikeable character for me. it might just be my bad memory, but i don't think Will has any meaningful character development. throughout the 114 chapters, he is always the happy boy who is kind to others, but comedically narcissistic. besides learning his motivations for the future and maturing in the most obvious ways, he is painfully generic. the only unique thing i can say about him is his narcissistic joke. hopefully his changes are more prominent after he recovers from his apathetic mood around chapter 114 or his training in general. lastly, the entire novel up to now feels like a very, very long setup. i have already said this is slow-paced, because it seems like the author is setting up and showing all of these characters who will be relevant to future plot points. some are even the cause of future plot points (Celine, Ella, Will's mother), but i think this is what ruins it for me. i do not know when this setup will ever pay off, and i'm not enjoying the novel as much as i was before. to me, it's dragging on and i don't want to invest more time into it. tldr; feels like the novel drags on, and many small events that i don't like pile up and ruin my enjoyment of it. it's still a great story, so for those reading this, please do give it a try. it might just be for you.

KuhakuORIGINLv13
Kuro_iiLv13

I started reading this thinking it would be an okay read to pass time because off the generic name and interesting synopsis, but man... was I wrong The story really reeled me in from the first chapter with how fun Will's death letter was and his interactions with the Gods. The pacing was just right for me and I felt the story never progressed too slow. Even the weird little interactions between character that might not be important at all don't feel unnecessary. I can definitely day this story has one of the best Character Development across the app as we see Will grow from a small goat milk loving baby to a goat milk loving young adult. The harem and romance was done amazingly as well. The interactions between Will and his lovers ( even before they get into relationships ) don't feel forced and the transitions from friends to lovers actually feel fairly real. The Link between the current and past lives is just the overwhelming good topping on an amazing cake. And finally, the World Building... This was probably my favourite, even though though I barely have any knowledge about most mythologies, I can't help but get invested into Hestia, the different classes, the Gods and how the foreshadowing of the different crisis looming over Hestia and Will. Overall, an Amazing book that's worth the coins and fast passes and an Author that clearly has passion and put his blood, sweat and tears in his work. Hope to be able to see this Story to the end. Best Luck Author, Thank You for this Amazing work of Art. :)

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