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EldotLv153yr
2021-11-16 16:50

TLDR: This is one of the best novels I have ever read. If you are comfortable with all of the tags on this book, I strongly urge you to read it as well. Long Version: At 501 chapters as of reviewing this work, this is one of the best written, planned, and executed novels I have ever read. While action, systems, magic, abilities, romance, love, and harems can be difficult to write well this is a master craft in not only exectuing all of them, but combining them into a tale that is funny, heartwarming, fear inducing, and constantly evolving. The 18+ sections and potentially traumatic sections are marked well so that people not interested can skip them without missing too much context, while used effectively to inform the reader about characters moral such as those who do and do not ask for consent in romantic and sexual moments. The characters are rich and three dimensional, ever character of importance has goals, dreams, and acts based upon them rather than being only plot devices. It feels like a developed world that we are just following this protagonist through. Each battle has a purpose, every person has a role to play, however short, and theg come together to create a story unlike any I have read. The fights, abilities, and system are some of the best as well. They make sense in context of use, fights are one by picking good strategies and taking risks as necessary. Growth is observed Often through battles as well as time skips to center on the most important moments. This is to the stories credit, as some novels feel extra long to make more money when barely anything happens or changes from the readers perspective. This novel has every word count, they all are important to the story whether for laughs, or to inspire awe. I have never felt that my money was spent for nothing. However that does not mean that the author barrels through things, rather they take their time at the moments that matter, and allow characters room to breathe, grow, and understand their relationships. There are very few novels I have read throughout my life that I hold this esteem for, and most of them are fantasy classics. If after reading this review you are still unsure I urge you to at least try the free chapters, and see if it is for you. I truly hope you enjoy this book, and that you grow to love it just as much as I do. I will be sure to update this every 500 chapters or so as long as I am reading. Thank you, author, for this book, and looking forward to reading more!

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ElyonAuthor

I'm very touched by this review. to have a reader like you is every author's dream. I would like to sincerely thank you for being part of Will's journey. may you have a wonderful, wonderful week ahead of you.

DaoistnfyAfeLv1

不会几乎军

Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

ummm did mc get both Celine and Celesta? I'm at chapter 50 and I got bored to read because 2/3 the possible love interest of mc will not be with him. and the story is kind of monotonous for me. Who are the current harem members? I don't mind spoilers.

Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

I need motivation to read this!

Preston_Playz_8167:ummm did mc get both Celine and Celesta? I'm at chapter 50 and I got bored to read because 2/3 the possible love interest of mc will not be with him. and the story is kind of monotonous for me. Who are the current harem members? I don't mind spoilers.
ShadeeDiabloLv3

how long will the story go on for?

DaoistsUZrHFLv10

es muy interesante hace volar tu imaginación...

EroFanLv4

it does not have any netorare, or too much dramatic moments right?

Elyon:I'm very touched by this review. to have a reader like you is every author's dream. I would like to sincerely thank you for being part of Will's journey. may you have a wonderful, wonderful week ahead of you.
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Gacha_LILYLv1

Idk just like😐

JaDe_Otaku_9419Lv13

Very comprehensive review. Good Job {^θ^}

DDavis_AKaLv1

it is good

Come_on_up321Lv1

Jangan lupa mampir ke novelku

CanorBrandoLv15

How about how he calls his goat mama like 10,000 times… ruined it for me

Gabriel_StirbuLv2

what is the meaning behind the golden, silver and red portals ?

Subham_SadhukhanLv3

anyone give me discord link plz

Arthur_Leywin1Lv4

Can we get a webtoon of this

Elyon:I'm very touched by this review. to have a reader like you is every author's dream. I would like to sincerely thank you for being part of Will's journey. may you have a wonderful, wonderful week ahead of you.
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Neptali_BiolenaLv11

might be expensIve. But I am worried, since in your adds this kind of book is free how come it's free when you are asking for virtual star or notes asking for payment so free are only those chapters to get the readers attention only to be ask for payment for succeeding chapters , isn't this a form or scamming from readers???

Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

why?

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Waikhom_SeityajitLv12

very nice novel and interesting

DaoistjGmcg0Lv2

I think it tells us when a world is about to be destroyed

Gabriel_Stirbu:what is the meaning behind the golden, silver and red portals ?
Manmeet_Singh_8886Lv14

Can anyone tell if mc is idiotic goody two shoes hero as per summary of this novel? Or there is more character depth to it? Because I hate self sacrificing 'heroes' most

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equinoticLv13

unfortunately, i feel like i have wasted my time reading this, and most of this review will probably be what i dislike about this great novel. a great beginning, that will probably hook in most who like this genre, showing interesting characters as the story goes on. as Will (MC) becomes older, more of the world is revealed, but not explored beyond "this is this, and that is that." although it feels slow-paced, the author is constantly releasing chapters. however, sometimes the writing feels muddy and repetitive, but i think those moments became rarer as i continued reading. i think many people will probably like this story with the exception of a few things like Will's shepherd class, Celine in general, and maybe Will's character. all the way until the tldr at the end are spoilers, so skip if you don't want those. i don't like Celine, mainly because her character is defined as "yandere crazy, but is actually a good person at heart." in the first few chapters she is shown, her only redeeming action was helping Lont. right before she enslaves Will as the price because he was the one to interrupt her experiment. she goes to torture him for the sake of his training and building resistance to dark magic. his reaction is: "She is a good person." Will's only mention of resentment is a single sentence and is only "a little bit." basically, she never looks or seems like a good person, because she never does anything to warrant that besides random thoughts where she sympathizes with Will. an unlikeable character for me. it might just be my bad memory, but i don't think Will has any meaningful character development. throughout the 114 chapters, he is always the happy boy who is kind to others, but comedically narcissistic. besides learning his motivations for the future and maturing in the most obvious ways, he is painfully generic. the only unique thing i can say about him is his narcissistic joke. hopefully his changes are more prominent after he recovers from his apathetic mood around chapter 114 or his training in general. lastly, the entire novel up to now feels like a very, very long setup. i have already said this is slow-paced, because it seems like the author is setting up and showing all of these characters who will be relevant to future plot points. some are even the cause of future plot points (Celine, Ella, Will's mother), but i think this is what ruins it for me. i do not know when this setup will ever pay off, and i'm not enjoying the novel as much as i was before. to me, it's dragging on and i don't want to invest more time into it. tldr; feels like the novel drags on, and many small events that i don't like pile up and ruin my enjoyment of it. it's still a great story, so for those reading this, please do give it a try. it might just be for you.

KuhakuORIGINLv13
Kuro_iiLv13

I started reading this thinking it would be an okay read to pass time because off the generic name and interesting synopsis, but man... was I wrong The story really reeled me in from the first chapter with how fun Will's death letter was and his interactions with the Gods. The pacing was just right for me and I felt the story never progressed too slow. Even the weird little interactions between character that might not be important at all don't feel unnecessary. I can definitely day this story has one of the best Character Development across the app as we see Will grow from a small goat milk loving baby to a goat milk loving young adult. The harem and romance was done amazingly as well. The interactions between Will and his lovers ( even before they get into relationships ) don't feel forced and the transitions from friends to lovers actually feel fairly real. The Link between the current and past lives is just the overwhelming good topping on an amazing cake. And finally, the World Building... This was probably my favourite, even though though I barely have any knowledge about most mythologies, I can't help but get invested into Hestia, the different classes, the Gods and how the foreshadowing of the different crisis looming over Hestia and Will. Overall, an Amazing book that's worth the coins and fast passes and an Author that clearly has passion and put his blood, sweat and tears in his work. Hope to be able to see this Story to the end. Best Luck Author, Thank You for this Amazing work of Art. :)

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