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murdasquaddark
murdasquaddarkLv153yr
2021-08-30 17:02

I hate doing reviews and writing these are a pain. There are only three (now four) authors I am willing to write one for. The story has amazing development and some parts that are really funny. The progression is not slow nor fast you actually feel like you are growing alongside the character. Along with that fact the character is not over powered at all in the beginning, he has the abilities but there useless unless he actually trains and becomes adept. I never experienced such an amazing story with a very well rounded plot. Over all I would recommend this book to all. I have a lot of respect and love for this book and can not wait for it to really bloom and I hope any who read this comment will join me in this amazing journey.

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Elyon
ElyonAuthor

Thank you for being part of the journey. Cheers to more adventures to come.

headlimit
headlimitLv15

how good is this? legend of futian legendary mechanic lord of mystery the kings avatar is it like these novels above?

krakq
krakqLv1

it's actually pretty interesting

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DaoistvZ1yee
DaoistvZ1yeeLv4

strongest your face

Elyon:Thank you for being part of the journey. Cheers to more adventures to come.
BRAGO
BRAGOLv1

you are making a 2 year child fight a Goblin and if you become a chid and drink goat milk will you adopt a goat as your mother

headlimit
headlimitLv15

your comment got deleted? lol that a big red flag to me, so im glad i didnt read this and just kept it in my list. now out it go from my list.

BRAGO:you are making a 2 year child fight a Goblin and if you become a chid and drink goat milk will you adopt a goat as your mother
Clarky_kun69
Clarky_kun69Lv2

What did his comment said?

headlimit:your comment got deleted? lol that a big red flag to me, so im glad i didnt read this and just kept it in my list. now out it go from my list.
J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv13

Can anyone tell me what chapter the 7 year duel with Rebecca happens? Thanks!

DreadDrop
DreadDropLv2

It hasn't happened yet and is far from happening, the MC is still 15 🥲

J_S_2998:Can anyone tell me what chapter the 7 year duel with Rebecca happens? Thanks!
J_S_2998
J_S_2998Lv13

Oh wow, I binge read super fast so was trying to gauge how many chapters I had between me and the duel, but if the duel still hasn’t even happened yet then the pacing must be a lot slower than I expected. Thanks for letting me know. I don’t mind slower pacing in completed books (like you find on Amazon), but slow pacing in Webnovel books make me nervous because so many authors stop writing for whatever reasons, and the readers get left hanging. So while I like the additional detail and opportunity for more romantic development and character building I worry that the author may get burnt out before they’ve finished the story. So I was really hoping that by 500-ish chapters they’d have at least made it past the duel, since the MC still has so much other stuff to accomplish. So please pace yourself so that you don’t get burned out or stop writing this story author-sama, pretty please? 🥺😁. It’s a great story and it would really stink to not be able to follow the MC with his harem of wives and living a happy life until the end, lol. So please keep up the great work author, and don’t forget pacing is important! And thank you DreadDrop, for answering my question even if it was “bad news”.

DreadDrop:It hasn't happened yet and is far from happening, the MC is still 15 🥲
Obsezzion
ObsezzionLv15

hey, third volume is done now, and the 7 Year fight should take place in near future. and I understand your worries! you can try to ask him on discord what his time plan for the fight might be...

J_S_2998:Oh wow, I binge read super fast so was trying to gauge how many chapters I had between me and the duel, but if the duel still hasn’t even happened yet then the pacing must be a lot slower than I expected. Thanks for letting me know. I don’t mind slower pacing in completed books (like you find on Amazon), but slow pacing in Webnovel books make me nervous because so many authors stop writing for whatever reasons, and the readers get left hanging. So while I like the additional detail and opportunity for more romantic development and character building I worry that the author may get burnt out before they’ve finished the story. So I was really hoping that by 500-ish chapters they’d have at least made it past the duel, since the MC still has so much other stuff to accomplish. So please pace yourself so that you don’t get burned out or stop writing this story author-sama, pretty please? 🥺😁. It’s a great story and it would really stink to not be able to follow the MC with his harem of wives and living a happy life until the end, lol. So please keep up the great work author, and don’t forget pacing is important! And thank you DreadDrop, for answering my question even if it was “bad news”.
Sage_Andrew
Sage_AndrewLv3

ii don't like it at all

DreadDrop
DreadDropLv2

I don't really consider it bad news since I really enjoy this webnovel and it's the only thing I've read this long (longest before this was 50 chapters since I have commitment issues 🙂) although the plot is slow paced It's enjoyable if you like getting on your toes and constantly Wondering what's going to happen next, I would cry if the author suddenly stops updating chapters

J_S_2998:Oh wow, I binge read super fast so was trying to gauge how many chapters I had between me and the duel, but if the duel still hasn’t even happened yet then the pacing must be a lot slower than I expected. Thanks for letting me know. I don’t mind slower pacing in completed books (like you find on Amazon), but slow pacing in Webnovel books make me nervous because so many authors stop writing for whatever reasons, and the readers get left hanging. So while I like the additional detail and opportunity for more romantic development and character building I worry that the author may get burnt out before they’ve finished the story. So I was really hoping that by 500-ish chapters they’d have at least made it past the duel, since the MC still has so much other stuff to accomplish. So please pace yourself so that you don’t get burned out or stop writing this story author-sama, pretty please? 🥺😁. It’s a great story and it would really stink to not be able to follow the MC with his harem of wives and living a happy life until the end, lol. So please keep up the great work author, and don’t forget pacing is important! And thank you DreadDrop, for answering my question even if it was “bad news”.
Clifford300
Clifford300Lv1

I have the same question bro

J_S_2998:Can anyone tell me what chapter the 7 year duel with Rebecca happens? Thanks!
JojoSoni
JojoSoniLv11

i'm surprised how others have not asked this question. Anyway, I'll ask it. Who are the other 3 authors you talked about?

_Jocare
_JocareLv12

same same..

JojoSoni:i'm surprised how others have not asked this question. Anyway, I'll ask it. Who are the other 3 authors you talked about?
murdasquaddark
murdasquaddarkLv15

MyLittleBrother Cultivation online. Demonic_Angel Divinity: against the godly system DiceVR Spending my retirement in a video game. Have not read other works but those three are really good some start out slow but i can't help but going back for more.

JojoSoni:i'm surprised how others have not asked this question. Anyway, I'll ask it. Who are the other 3 authors you talked about?
JojoSoni
JojoSoniLv11

i have read only cultivation online. i have to read other 2 now. also, i would recommend reading the villain wants to live made by the same author who wrote the novel's extra (i think this novel invented or at least popularised the trope of author transmigrated into his own novel) grasping evil is also good. and devil's son-in-law has pretty smart mc (only con is the big harem)

murdasquaddark:MyLittleBrother Cultivation online. Demonic_Angel Divinity: against the godly system DiceVR Spending my retirement in a video game. Have not read other works but those three are really good some start out slow but i can't help but going back for more.
Clifford300
Clifford300Lv1

Lods meron ba discord?

Elyon:Thank you for being part of the journey. Cheers to more adventures to come.
Preston_Playz_8167
Preston_Playz_8167Lv4

who are the current harem members? I need motivation to read!

DreadDrop:It hasn't happened yet and is far from happening, the MC is still 15 🥲
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EldotLv15

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equinotic
equinoticLv13

unfortunately, i feel like i have wasted my time reading this, and most of this review will probably be what i dislike about this great novel. a great beginning, that will probably hook in most who like this genre, showing interesting characters as the story goes on. as Will (MC) becomes older, more of the world is revealed, but not explored beyond "this is this, and that is that." although it feels slow-paced, the author is constantly releasing chapters. however, sometimes the writing feels muddy and repetitive, but i think those moments became rarer as i continued reading. i think many people will probably like this story with the exception of a few things like Will's shepherd class, Celine in general, and maybe Will's character. all the way until the tldr at the end are spoilers, so skip if you don't want those. i don't like Celine, mainly because her character is defined as "yandere crazy, but is actually a good person at heart." in the first few chapters she is shown, her only redeeming action was helping Lont. right before she enslaves Will as the price because he was the one to interrupt her experiment. she goes to torture him for the sake of his training and building resistance to dark magic. his reaction is: "She is a good person." Will's only mention of resentment is a single sentence and is only "a little bit." basically, she never looks or seems like a good person, because she never does anything to warrant that besides random thoughts where she sympathizes with Will. an unlikeable character for me. it might just be my bad memory, but i don't think Will has any meaningful character development. throughout the 114 chapters, he is always the happy boy who is kind to others, but comedically narcissistic. besides learning his motivations for the future and maturing in the most obvious ways, he is painfully generic. the only unique thing i can say about him is his narcissistic joke. hopefully his changes are more prominent after he recovers from his apathetic mood around chapter 114 or his training in general. lastly, the entire novel up to now feels like a very, very long setup. i have already said this is slow-paced, because it seems like the author is setting up and showing all of these characters who will be relevant to future plot points. some are even the cause of future plot points (Celine, Ella, Will's mother), but i think this is what ruins it for me. i do not know when this setup will ever pay off, and i'm not enjoying the novel as much as i was before. to me, it's dragging on and i don't want to invest more time into it. tldr; feels like the novel drags on, and many small events that i don't like pile up and ruin my enjoyment of it. it's still a great story, so for those reading this, please do give it a try. it might just be for you.

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Kuro_ii
Kuro_iiLv13

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