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Hedra_DragonLv23yr
2021-10-01 02:00

It is written in an entertaining enough way, but the MC’s behavior is often weird and doesn’t make sense when you consider that he was 18 before reincarnating. My main issue is a bit further on. Stop now if you want to avoid spoilers. His dark magic teacher decides to put a slave collar on him and have him do manual labor for her, while spending nights torturing him with dark magic to build resistance. After of a year of this she also trains him with a spear. Compared to all of his other teachers, who asked consent, and actually taught him properly, he is most grateful to her! On top of that, he feels guilty for being mad at her for the enslavement. I was willing to give it a chance at first but that was the final straw.

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Zzz_808Lv3

thanks for saving me from this mc beta

DaoistbFsplILv1

He is grateful to her considering that he also learned his master's past that she suffered worse than Williams,also MC learned the benefits of a slave collar at later chapters knowing half-elves are a hot commodity in slave market having a collar can deter slave traders besides the collar has a life saving function and a special skill specifically for the Dark Mages, so He is grateful for her but he did not forgave her until He Conquered her maidenhood to be apart of harem😏

tatsuya277353Lv4

i hope so

DaoistbFsplI:He is grateful to her considering that he also learned his master's past that she suffered worse than Williams,also MC learned the benefits of a slave collar at later chapters knowing half-elves are a hot commodity in slave market having a collar can deter slave traders besides the collar has a life saving function and a special skill specifically for the Dark Mages, so He is grateful for her but he did not forgave her until He Conquered her maidenhood to be apart of harem😏
_Dream_God_Lv14

that's just an excuse and a way for the author to justify something that obviously reserved alot of negative feedback

DaoistbFsplI:He is grateful to her considering that he also learned his master's past that she suffered worse than Williams,also MC learned the benefits of a slave collar at later chapters knowing half-elves are a hot commodity in slave market having a collar can deter slave traders besides the collar has a life saving function and a special skill specifically for the Dark Mages, so He is grateful for her but he did not forgave her until He Conquered her maidenhood to be apart of harem😏
DaoistbFsplILv1

I mean its the author's story every part of the story is an excuse i drop this novel a long time ago..

_Dream_God_:that's just an excuse and a way for the author to justify something that obviously reserved alot of negative feedback
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

You masochistic.

DaoistbFsplI:He is grateful to her considering that he also learned his master's past that she suffered worse than Williams,also MC learned the benefits of a slave collar at later chapters knowing half-elves are a hot commodity in slave market having a collar can deter slave traders besides the collar has a life saving function and a special skill specifically for the Dark Mages, so He is grateful for her but he did not forgave her until He Conquered her maidenhood to be apart of harem😏
GhostyZLv4

Ew beta cuck MC

John_Rex_98Lv4

cuck u

GhostyZ:Ew beta cuck MC
GhostyZLv4

You NTR. Kill yourself cuck.

John_Rex_98:cuck u
Roy_LangleyLv1

Ya, I didn't care for this part either but kept with it a while longer. The goat stuff just became to much for me. I tried hard to overlook it, I really did. I made it a while after he's in school/academy and just couldn't anymore. Surprised it has such a high rating for making people uncomfortable because I've seen this opinion alot lol.

Noct_isLv2

The goat thing also gave me cancer when reading bro

Roy_Langley:Ya, I didn't care for this part either but kept with it a while longer. The goat stuff just became to much for me. I tried hard to overlook it, I really did. I made it a while after he's in school/academy and just couldn't anymore. Surprised it has such a high rating for making people uncomfortable because I've seen this opinion alot lol.
XDaniel51Lv1

I've heard about this goat a lot, ehats the story with that? please spoil me that part. since the novel is 1.5k chapters I don't wanna get stuck wandering when a part I hate will be over.

Roy_Langley:Ya, I didn't care for this part either but kept with it a while longer. The goat stuff just became to much for me. I tried hard to overlook it, I really did. I made it a while after he's in school/academy and just couldn't anymore. Surprised it has such a high rating for making people uncomfortable because I've seen this opinion alot lol.
521soliBLv10

Dont worry. in the beginning the whole goat thing annoyed me too but after a couple hundred chapters it stopped. not only that but i actually kinda missed the main goat after she died. to spoil you on that, the goat is a reallyy beatiful goddess that sacrificed her life to save William and reincarnated in that form to look after him. the same with the rest of the goats. I'd recommend you read the whole story if the goats are the only thing bugging you. Believe me, its really slow at the start but in the end everything makes sense.

XDaniel51:I've heard about this goat a lot, ehats the story with that? please spoil me that part. since the novel is 1.5k chapters I don't wanna get stuck wandering when a part I hate will be over.
SD_LivLv4

я прочитал 380 глав, лучше эта книга не становится. Начиная с того что главный герой постоянно ослаблен, 90% глав занимает рассказам о второстепенных персонажах которые нахер не нужны, 1% это сражения главного героя. Про систему глпвный герой начиная с ранних глав выучил много профессий, но ни одну он не использует. Та же темная магия, нахер он её качал если даже не использует? тоже самое про повелитель грома, нахер он её качал если использование её обернётся тем что на него будет охотиться вся страна демонов? Единственное что он использует это монах и кавалер, это просто убожество. Поговорим о его главном классе пастух, он может приручать только стадных животных, к своему удивлению и этот класс он не использует в бою, так как может приручать сранных коз и монстров с частями тел коров и лошадей. Но при этом драконов и виверн и других демонический созданий он приручать не может, хотя виверны живут стаями. Похоже автор считает что невозможно сделать из них стадных животных. Самое забавное что 200 глав, Главный герой никак не прокачивался, он просто веселился в академии и строили "гениальные планы" один из них позволить одной из подруг есть шоколад чтобы найти их главу, и мало того что его чуть не убили и героиню не изнасиловали, они еще не выяснили в чем был их план. Теперь после того как герой 4 года не мог пользоваться магией, он еще и не может дольше 1 часа сражаться в бою и это на месяца 4 минимум. И это не говоря о тупой стране и академии которые ничего не могут сделать с нападениями на их страну, теперь все сильные люди превращены в статуи и 3 страны и 1 организация хочет захватить их страну, я блять не знаю как главный герой который очень слабый будет с этим справляться

521soliB:Dont worry. in the beginning the whole goat thing annoyed me too but after a couple hundred chapters it stopped. not only that but i actually kinda missed the main goat after she died. to spoil you on that, the goat is a reallyy beatiful goddess that sacrificed her life to save William and reincarnated in that form to look after him. the same with the rest of the goats. I'd recommend you read the whole story if the goats are the only thing bugging you. Believe me, its really slow at the start but in the end everything makes sense.
521soliBLv10

Why did you write all that in Russian😂, дурак

SD_Liv:я прочитал 380 глав, лучше эта книга не становится. Начиная с того что главный герой постоянно ослаблен, 90% глав занимает рассказам о второстепенных персонажах которые нахер не нужны, 1% это сражения главного героя. Про систему глпвный герой начиная с ранних глав выучил много профессий, но ни одну он не использует. Та же темная магия, нахер он её качал если даже не использует? тоже самое про повелитель грома, нахер он её качал если использование её обернётся тем что на него будет охотиться вся страна демонов? Единственное что он использует это монах и кавалер, это просто убожество. Поговорим о его главном классе пастух, он может приручать только стадных животных, к своему удивлению и этот класс он не использует в бою, так как может приручать сранных коз и монстров с частями тел коров и лошадей. Но при этом драконов и виверн и других демонический созданий он приручать не может, хотя виверны живут стаями. Похоже автор считает что невозможно сделать из них стадных животных. Самое забавное что 200 глав, Главный герой никак не прокачивался, он просто веселился в академии и строили "гениальные планы" один из них позволить одной из подруг есть шоколад чтобы найти их главу, и мало того что его чуть не убили и героиню не изнасиловали, они еще не выяснили в чем был их план. Теперь после того как герой 4 года не мог пользоваться магией, он еще и не может дольше 1 часа сражаться в бою и это на месяца 4 минимум. И это не говоря о тупой стране и академии которые ничего не могут сделать с нападениями на их страну, теперь все сильные люди превращены в статуи и 3 страны и 1 организация хочет захватить их страну, я блять не знаю как главный герой который очень слабый будет с этим справляться
DaoistAlYdWNLv11

I got to chapter 79 and came to the comments to give me a reason to continue. unfortunately i will be dropping this. To me the biggest issue is the tone of the writing. it's upbeat and casual about sensitive things like slavery and such. Also, the author tries a little too hard with the goat's motherly love and such. When you add in the weird decision and narcissism of the MC, the whole just doesn't click 🤷🏿‍♂️

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