So I'm at the latest chapter around 368. All I can say is this is enjoyable for a very specific type of readers. The MC goes around catching pokemon (harem members), going through broken time-space portals to new worlds, and kinda just existing there. Now thats just my summary but i'll expand. Writing quality: Its quite good( 1 of the things that keep people reading it) Updates: very stable, 2 chapters every couple days. (the second and main reason people reads it) Story Development: The story has no plot. If u want to read it , keep it in mind that author is not writing a serious story where mc may mature or anything.He is just making mc stupid on purpose so there may be some comedy and life of slice type stuff Character Design: MC is kid the entire time(even 2-3 years passed) he still did not age a single year and lets leave the physical part alone. He does not even mature a bit , rather in thinking he is somehow becoming more stupid. sometimes author make him know the plot of the world he is in, next chapter he wont know it. Sometimes he decides something is wrong and stops but immediately agrees to do himself even when he knows it is wrong. World background: Author is just using established world with hardly any changes with the plot of the worlds it self. Overal 2.6/5: If u want to read it like "My multiverse Trip"( which is basically the same but mc is more smart and that author likes to destroy the plot instead of continuing it by inserting his own mc in that novel's mc place) I would never recommend reading it if u want to read a serious or a more logical novel.
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XD ok i will read iy
i was saying for ur novel that based on its current story its more non serious type novel instead of a serious one. in simple words a novel to spend time but not one that could get u hooked up to it because of its plot or character interactions(which in my opinion has not improved in the entire novel, sometimes degraded). atleast till yet i didnt see it. other than that ur novel is great to read to time pass.
Somehow, you seem like a good guy for wording it like that. Some readers would often times call these kinds of works as 'trash'. Kinda harsh if you ask me. Even though fanfic authors use some established worlds as their setting, some would try to change the plot or such to fit their tastes. (This rarely happens, though)
Thanks for the clear review, finally someone called it like it is instead of just insulting the author or the grammar. I'm willing to tolerate many things, but stupid/childish/dense MC are not one of those.. truly a shame as I've red most fanfics on the site and 600+ chapters are quite juicy.. but no, I'd just end up heavily insulting the author myself shortly after for lack of logic, I've already done it too many times..
