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Sean1234
Sean1234Lv105yr
2020-04-08 23:52

So I'm at the latest chapter around 350. All I can say is this is enjoyable for a very specific type of readers. The MC goes around catching pokemon (harem members), going through broken time-space portals to new worlds, and kinda just existing there. Now thats just my summary but i'll expand. Writing quality: Quite bad in the beginning, but the author does improve later on. It's not a jumbled mess and unreadable, but does take deciphering occasionally. There are the common grammatical mistakes found on most translated/non english novels. Updates: very stable, 2 chapters every couple days. best point of the fanfic tbh. Story Development: Now this point i'm confused about. There is not much story or plot. There are no goals, stakes, and consequences. The MC has to go to other worlds because the system. He has to get stronger, because his powers are too OP? There is no reason for any of the girls to be in this expect that the MC wanted to save them and dominate them. Basically the story is a power trip fantasy/self insert to imagine yourself (not) banging the harem. Character Design: The MC is a kid the entire time. you expect him to get through his child hood, and move on. NOPE. The MC will stay 12 the entire time, and STILL get chicks. Like what kind of pedophile women are in this? Maybe there is a shota complex in here somewhere. But personally everything the MC does is unrealistic and naive. It's the real world and a 8 year old is giving out pills that makes people young, has a f****** personal world, and weapons of mass destruction at his side, and people treat this fine. (There is no need to mention the woman because they have no character or personality and there is too many to even remember. Probably every woman that exists in the fanfic is trying to bang the MC IDK) World background: It's a fanfic, the world is established and the MC is just there. Overal 2/5: I mean if you like the how the MC is always 12, never actually getting with girls (I dont get that about harems, most just get teased and are just wasting time), and generally being a beta simp cuck. This is for you

The Multiverse Conqueror

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4.2
1111 Chs

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Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101Lv6

pretty much correct yet somehow this novel still have tons of people reading it daily(Maybe just to waste time ) and some even gave it 5 stars despite such problems. 1 thing u failed to mention is that even if his looks not change in years. he become stupid for no reason as he grows sometimes.

5yr
27
Mouloud_Mohand
Mouloud_MohandLv1

I completely lost the urge to continue after reading this.

4yr
23
rangga
ranggaLv4

Jadi dia seorang shota dengan kumpulan wanita disampingnya hadeh, padahal babnya banyak tapi ragu mau membaca

4yr
HNIC409
HNIC409Lv15

Honestly it took me forever to jus get passed the 2nd vol. I was really hoping to get a time laps. Buh thanks for letting me kno

4yr
1
Tired_Regressor
Tired_RegressorLv3

Thanks for the info. Imma stop reading this for now (I don't really know why I continued reading this in the first place).

3yr
Just_Reads
Just_ReadsLv2

Yeah, yeah nice good critic and who paid you for roasting this novel, or mybe you must make novel is perfect for you, If you not like then don't read that make you brain want suicide or have cancer in brain

3yr
Buzzard03_11
Buzzard03_11Lv1

Well I have no problem (well, if I have it but I can stand it) with it being a 12-year-old boy, another favorite fanfic of mine is like this "Soul Evolution System" but the other things, that there is no plot and only collect pokemon's is making me hesitate to read it

2yr
1
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animadrop
animadropLv5

Update stability and story development saved the rating from 1 * pathetic grammar, poor quality dialogues, poor quality reasoning in the novel, bad explanations and form, etc. basically, even if you are bored and looking for a fanfiction to read where a lot of wish-fulfillment happens, this isn't something I would recommend. only the amount already written makes it slightly appealing.

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FvkYouBoy
FvkYouBoyLv4

Seeing the tag makes me don't want to read this even though it have so many useless chapters.i mean chapters. My guts is telling me that beating my dck is more enjoyable than reading this

5yr
Daoistahombrur
DaoistahombrurLv2

Just wondering if you all are reading the same story that I just tried to read? I mean a four or five star review, when you can't even follow the story because of all the grammatical errors. Come on! Dear author, maybe take a moment or two to go over your work. That way you can catch some of these errors yourself. Unless of course you just want to throw words out there. If thats it, then your doing an awful fine job.

5yr
PandaWanKenobi
PandaWanKenobiLv4

I like the story so far.......................................................................................................................................................

5yr
puppynochulo
puppynochuloLv4

Conversation between characters doesnt really amount to anything, info dumps here and there, no clear character development, pacing of the plot and story is really bad, not sure if the MC is too stupid or naive, the interaction between characters are so fake, wrong use of pronouns, errors on grammar here and there. Had a good theme for the story maybe you can reboot it and do proofreading.

5yr
Maurz
MaurzLv4

If you have 2 brain cells and enjoy slow intentional suicide by destroying those said brain cells by reading this, by all means, this is the story for you.

5yr
Ending
EndingLv6

Go kill 4 emperors now At the beginning of the story so much power without doing anything +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

5yr
BlakkStan
BlakkStanLv4

The first chapter is lame, justice to everyone, evil or good, WTF. I don't want to read and find out his sorry ass ends up in some ****hole.

5yr
Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13

Honestly I find the god and mc extremely odd, first of all he's god can't he give the mc a body that won't implode on itself, second the god actually preaches human ideals? What? Also find out what's love? That's so subjective you can ask 2 people in a relationship and you can get different answers. Justice to good and evil? This one I don't get are you supposed to go to a serial rapist and cause someone hit him be like here have medicine and a nice day¿?¿?¿? And after that kill or imprison him cause he rapes people?????? And why give him a fucking panda hoodie? Instead of a bracelet with the same effect? Or a normal shirt?

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