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PandaSempai

PandaSempai

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I like to read novels. I would also write some novels when I have free time!

2020-05-29 JoinedGlobal
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  • PandaSempai
    PandaSempai7 months ago
    Replied to Psan2

    Any idea as to what the sauce is? I kinda wanna see the raw of this lol.

  • PandaSempai
    PandaSempai8 months ago
    Commented

    It's a very VERY slow burn, which is most likely the reason for the lowering statistics. I'm personally enjoying the ride but most people prolly have ADHD brain and can't really wait for things to get to the more exciting stuff 100 chapters later haha. 40-50 chapters maybe but 100 chapters do feel really slow. Kinda reminds me of that one Iron Man fanfic where Stark was STILL a toddler after hundreds of chapters later. Do keep up the great job, though! It's awesome seeing more Slice of Life fanfics being published in this platform. Especially a non MTL and non Chinese fanfic like this one.

  • PandaSempai
    PandaSempaia year ago
    Posted

    It's actually quite good not gonna lie. It's funny and was a fun read overall. The only thing I have gripes about is the romance side of things. I can't even call it a slow burn since almost nothing of note on the romance side of things has happened. Like the translator, I was actually beginning to suspect this was some Yaoi BS or a reverse harem(polyandry). It's been 120+ chapters and the MC is still being salty about his first rejection when he was 12 xD.

  • PandaSempai
    PandaSempaia year ago
    Replied to I_Love_Hina

    It would be a huge shame if you discontinue this. Annoying trolls such as this guy should just be ignored. Heck, you could also delete the message.

  • PandaSempai
    PandaSempaia year ago
    Replied to FIENDCELESTIAL

    There's a couple I saw just by searching. The ones I saw were just 20+ and 2 chapters though. Would you mind pointing me to the one you're talking about? Thanks!

  • PandaSempai
    PandaSempaia year ago
    Posted

    It's decent enough in my opinion, but the latter chapters just ended up devolving into a "Gotta Catch 'Em All!" Deus Ex Machina cliche that it kinda sapped all the lighthearted fun it had much earlier on. I don't think even the author could recall all the harem members with the sheer numbers lol. The plot later on just revolves around "Oh, a nice world" -> Using his immaculate and perfect image to 'catch' all the girls he takes a fancy to -> Leave -> Find a new one -> rinse and repeat. I had a bit of fun reading it earlier on but after many more repetition, it just became bland. The harem members went from, "Oh, that's quite good" to "Oh, she's a member of his harem? Damn, I completely forgot".

  • PandaSempai
    PandaSempai4 years ago
    Replied to SHADOWBLADE

    This is probably done by someone who just wanted to post this here so that he could archive it and read it for himself.

  • PandaSempai
    PandaSempai4 years ago
    Replied to SHADOWBLADE

    Here: https://www.novelupdates.com/series/milk-princess/ It's a novel with the same title. There should be an epub of it somewhere, fully translated, along with the illustrations.

  • PandaSempai
    PandaSempai4 years ago
    Posted

    If you're looking for some information about this book before diving in and reading it, then look no further! The Writing Quality of this fanfiction is not something too glamorous or technical. If you looking for that kind of novel/fanfiction (a fanfiction that was written in a very professional manner), then you're better off looking for something else because this is just not it. This is also slow paced and DOES NOT have action in each and every chapter. This is not an Action novel but a Slice of Life one with bits and pieces of unprofessionally written action and/or comedy if you could call it that. Maybe skits or an attempt to be funny would be a better term. Story Development is nothing special. Again, this is a Wish Fulfillment fanfiction and the author clearly do not aspire to write some phenomenal fanfiction that would blow everyone's mind. As he said multiple times already, "What I want is to write something that I could relax my mind in while doing so and not some overly dramatic sh*tstorm. That's not my style and never will be. Dramatic sh*ts are already plaguing everyone's life right now so I, for one, don't enjoy writing about sob stories"(Basically my interpretation of his replies to the comments. Don't take my word for it though). Maybe, after reading bits and pieces of the novel, you'll go like, "Oh, that's something that's already in the original! Can't you write something more ORIGINAL, Author!?" Well, in my humble opinion, you should go look at which section you are right now. What type of book is this? A fanfiction. What style did the author say he wanted it to be in the introduction? A Wish Fulfillment and/or Self Insert(something along those lines). So, clearly, this isn't exactly the place where you should be looking for and mayhaps even demanding the story to be ORIGINAL. That's because, no matter how hard any author try, a fanfiction will always be that, an fan art that was made by a, obviously, fan who likes the original work. That's it. Original Idea or not, slap it in a fanfiction and it's already gonna reek of the same smell as the original story. If you want something original, go read the original titles in this site. There's many of them and your entire lifetime is probably not even enough to read all of them. Character Design. Enough said. The author chose characters from other original novels that he likes(maybe?) while trying his best to make them stay true to their characters. Whether he failed or not is up to your view about it. I'd like to say that he did quite well but it obviously needs more work, a lot of it. From what I heard, he even went as far as reading the original material a few times to get the info he couldn't get from the fandomwikis. Updating Stability. This fanfiction updates pretty much everyday. This novel started in around November and it's now in chapter 160. What can you say about the update schedule? World Background. This one hasn't been explored too much so I can't say much about it. Overall, this novel is not for someone who likes to read a novel filled with developments each and every chapter. I myself read this to pass time and to just chill around. Well, I hope this will help you future readers in deciding whether or not you want to read this work or not.

A Traveler's Legend: Leisurely Living My Life In A Normal World

Born as an orphan, Shin Flammia grew up in the orphanage until he reached the legal age to find work. Due to this decision of his that led him to venture to the outside world, Shin was able to get to know something that turned into his hobby eventually. And that something is Anime. Day and night, he would work his ass off everyday just to buy a limited edition game or manga that he wanted. He continued to immerse himself in this newfound hobby of his that eventually, he couldn't take care of himself anymore. Because of his lack of sleep for the past few days and his body being as pale and sickly as it is, his body gave up. Slowly, he felt his body becoming heavy and his head is spinning. That was the end of his first life. But, whether it was because of a fluke, a beautiful, divinely ordained fluke, but a fluke nonetheless, he was granted a new shot at life. He died, yes, but a being that is so powerful that it could live inside the endless void offered him a new life. Why did this powerful being gave him this chance? Well, that was because the powerful being wanted him to, basically, 'beat up someone'. Why? Well, it's because its friends didn't let this powerful being join in in its friend's 'fun time'. A being this powerful can be this petty? Well, duh, try staying inside the endless void for millions and millions of years. Let's see how you will deal with the boredom! "Angels! Angels are so cute!" "I need to first get stronger so I can live my life in leisure later!" "Hey! Isn't that person supposed to be the antagonist of this whole thing? Should I take him down now to avoid future troubles?" "Whaa... everything is going so smoothly. Everything's always in my favor that it's scary!" Follow Shin in his attempt to enjoy life at his own leisure. Playing sports, battling, mofumofu times, and even forming his own crystal palace. This, is where a new legend, starts. ◇◆◇◆◇◆◇◆ The characters that will be introduced from other works are not owned by me. All of them belong to their rightful owners. I am not claiming ownership to any of the characters that belong to any series. This is just a fan fiction and is created because of my love for the animes that may be portrayed in this work. ◇◆◇◆◇◆◇◆ ◇◆◇◆◇◆◇◆ //WARNING!// I am completely new to writing and so, errors can be seen here and there. But, before I publish chapters, I made sure to proofread it for about 5 times. So, if errors can still be seen, please leave a paragraph comment so that I can fix it. If genres such as; Adventure, Fantasy, Harem, and Slice of Life are not to your liking, this fanfiction is not for you. If you are still curious enough to still try reading this and found it 'unpleasant' and 'not fit to your taste', then you are the one at fault for I already gave you my warning. ◇◆◇◆◇◆◇◆ Anime(s)/Novel(s)/Manga(s) that has been included in this novel are; • Gabriel DropOut! • Highschool DxD • Masamune-kun no Revenge • (will be updated as the story progress) I will be posting this story on ScribbleHub!

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