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FvkYouBoy
FvkYouBoyLv45yr
2019-12-05 20:30

Seeing the tag makes me don't want to read this even though it have so many useless chapters.i mean chapters. My guts is telling me that beating my dck is more enjoyable than reading this

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LittleApple
LittleAppleAuthor

hahahah

DaoistMatthew
DaoistMatthewLv14

Facepalm....

Southmonk
SouthmonkLv15

So u rated a book wiithout even reading it?

Seud
SeudLv4

I’ve read this trash and I feel it shouldn’t even get 1 star let alone 2, lol.

Southmonk:So u rated a book wiithout even reading it?
Baevida_17
Baevida_17Lv12

It isn't nice calling someone's work trash. He did it to encourage the author. At least advice the author on getting an editor rather than calling the work trash.

Seud:I’ve read this trash and I feel it shouldn’t even get 1 star let alone 2, lol.
Ky4ler
Ky4lerLv4

Lol slow growth and harem bad

Teshhz
TeshhzLv4

hah... the girls keep growing in numbers but the MC is dense as ever...... author San please give some common sense to him its nerve racking to keep reading like this!

HNIC409
HNIC409Lv15

I've read up to chap 219. I honestly wanna kno will there be a time skip? He doesn't have be op (even tho he is already kinda) jus let him become 15 or 16. Also stop spoiling the Mc. Yes he's a kid buh let's be honest there are kids wit horrible lives irl. So letting him suffer or have som major setbacks won't hurt.

LittleApple:hahahah
HNIC409
HNIC409Lv15

Also you don't need to write about his every single move. Try balancing that wit his missions. I personally find the Mc lacking in many areas buh they be solved easily. 1. Let him understand that life isn't rainbows nd sunshine. This will help his development 2. Please please for the love all books. Get rid of some the girls. I'm not saying kill them off buh let them not love him anymore. He's a kid. They are all well over the legal age (v2). Let them become his overprotective friends or jus his friends. After all he's a kid. 3. Let him have common sense this will bring more readers. He can be dense buh not to the point where ppl wanna throw their phones

LittleApple:hahahah
Kingsav_Savage
Kingsav_SavageLv12

Trash

Baevida_17:It isn't nice calling someone's work trash. He did it to encourage the author. At least advice the author on getting an editor rather than calling the work trash.
MakiTeto
MakiTetoLv10

Look in the mirror

Kingsav_Savage:Trash
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