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Neuvillette's Past Life: Black Woz. how is he violet's past life. Fix the naming. Chapter 1, blackwoz is neuvillete's, here ur saying its violets

maybe some translation error ? as we can't be sure what is translated is 100% as it is as it was meant to be conveyed in original. though I think translator should have fixed this.

Thanks for sharing the spoilers. I think I might return to it in the future after some more chapters have been released, as the story is interesting no matter what. For me, the main issue was the MC's deteriorating mental condition. The spoilers seem intriguing, especially how the situation will develop to the point where the MC plans to kill Sakura and so on. Also, the reveal of the MC being a fragment sounds interesting—I’m curious to see how that will happen. I remember there was an interlude set in the current era that mentioned something about the MC trying to reach his true self beyond time, but I didn’t expect that even his previous-era self was just a fragment of himself. I guess the gaze he always feels in the Imaginary Tree is actually the gaze of his true self. The MC did follow Otto’s path in a way, but unlike Otto, he only ended up fragmenting his personality. All in all, I think I’ll return to it after 50–100 more chapters have been translated to see if I’m in the mood to continue reading. Again, thanks for spoilers ( it did make me think of reading this story further).

I can understand the MC failing to resist or change fate—that’s not the problem. It’s also fine for him to be sad or a crybaby about it. The real issue is how Aponia and Mobius constantly manipulate him, and despite knowing exactly what’s happening, he still allows it. After all, we already know Aponia’s story in the original, which shows what happens when you try to change fate. Also, Elysia knows how close Seele is to the MC, yet even when she saw Seele in a tank while visiting Mobius, she didn’t mention anything to mc about it. she is shown to love mc but how can you love someone when you won't even mention the situation of ur lover's sister to him no matter the reason. I guess that's enough from my side.

Also, what’s even more frustrating is that he was actually more mentally stable and not so much of a crybaby around the 100th chapter. No idea why he's deteriorating instead of improving.

also there is harem in it despite no harem tag. atleast thats what I can get from reading it. mc seems to be paired with Mobius and Elysia (nearly confirmed after 200 chapters). no idea about others but I do think I read some comment where 1 more name was mentioned.

Great story, but I ended up dropping it because it gets annoying after a certain point. The MC is way too weak mentally—anyone can easily read and manipulate him. He thinks he's keeping his secrets, but Elysia mostly knows what he's planning, aside from his future knowledge. Also, he's far too much of a crybaby. While I understand that it's part of the story’s premise, I had hoped he would grow. However, after more than 200 chapters, he’s only getting worse. He takes guilt for humans dying simply because he had the ability to protect them or because he knew it was their fate to die. Then there's Seele's fate—he simply accepts what happened to her as his fault, even though his plan was ruined by interference from Mobius and Aponia. The most annoying part? He spends the night with Mobius as a way to vent his anger over this. Wow. At this point, the MC feels like someone who can easily be manipulated, which wasn’t the case in chapters 50–60. In recent chapters, it feels like Aponia and Mobius are constantly manipulating him, and he just keeps being a crybaby despite recognizing what’s happening. Anyway, for those who enjoy this kind of scenario, they might find the novel interesting. But I’m out.

i think its suppression from the plane. He is being suppressed by the planer lord.

Cant really tell about story, character and story devleopmenet as writing quality is just way too bad. Feels like a poorly edited MTL, with awkward phrasing, grammatical errors, and unnatural sentence structures that make it difficult to follow.

Writing Quality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Excellent translation, easy to understand) Stability of Updates: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Story is completed) Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Engaging and well-paced) Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Well-developed characters who stand on their own, not just to highlight the MC) World Background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Brilliantly integrates Genshin Impact’s lore into an epic, original narrative) A fantastic read overall!