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Endless_Clouds
Endless_CloudsLv55yr
2019-02-06 19:52

I do not know why reincarnate a soul that came from the planet Earth if the soul of the reincarnated body is that which assimilates the soul that was reincarnating and the most scrotal of all this is what the system helps the previous soul of the dead body in This process . I really wasted my time reading this shįt.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I feel revulsion every time I remember this shįt, I really hate it

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten)

lets_get_this_rice
4.1
83 Chs

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lets_get_this_rice
lets_get_this_riceAuthor

Well, it's too bad you don't like it. We all have our own tastes I guess. However, is three one star reviews really necessary? I mean, I'm sorry my novel didn't appeal to you, but a more constructive review would be very nice! :)

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Richard_Rahl
Richard_RahlLv5

I haven’t read yet but I believe his criticism was fairly constructive. It points out a totally unintelligible part of your story that, assuming he copied correctly needs to b fixed. That seems pretty constructive. I’m gonna read now better not find this sentence still in there XD.

lets_get_this_rice:Well, it's too bad you don't like it. We all have our own tastes I guess. However, is three one star reviews really necessary? I mean, I'm sorry my novel didn't appeal to you, but a more constructive review would be very nice! :)
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DaoofCats
DaoofCatsLv5

maybe its because I haven't read this yet, but couldn't tell wtf this guy was trying to say lol

5yr
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Molkar
MolkarLv6

from what I got, it starts with a dude from earth dying and acquiring a system which helped him transmigrate into a body from another world. The problem is that the original soul of that body ended up assimilating the soul from earth, and the f*cking system, instead of helping its host went and helped the other soul... or that's what I understood from what this dude wrote at least.

DaoofCats:maybe its because I haven't read this yet, but couldn't tell wtf this guy was trying to say lol
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AmbroseUFO
AmbroseUFOLv5

It stopped being constructive when he decided to do it more than once

Richard_Rahl:I haven’t read yet but I believe his criticism was fairly constructive. It points out a totally unintelligible part of your story that, assuming he copied correctly needs to b fixed. That seems pretty constructive. I’m gonna read now better not find this sentence still in there XD.
5yr
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Endless_Clouds
Endless_CloudsLv5

?????

AmbroseUFO:It stopped being constructive when he decided to do it more than once
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Dvaita
DvaitaLv5

Scrotal of all sounds like a rare insult

5yr
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Lazareth
LazarethLv4

Yeah that's a blunder but it's early it can be fixed.

5yr
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