I understand what you mean. Will definitely make it so that not everything is 'given' to him all the time. Trying to have mc grow through effort would most definitely better the story in several aspect. Thank you veru much! :) Hope to improve over the comming chapters. Wish you all the best!

I am sorry if I was too crass in my wording, There are definitely good elements to this book, I like your command of the language, for example, it was pleasant to read. And there is definitely a niche for power-trip kind of story - many readers appreciate exactly that. Its just not my cup of tea.

Thank you very much! However, you were not wrong in your review, good sir. I think my main state of mind when I first started writing was "yeah, let's make a badass mc who does epic sh**" But as I kept writing, I felt like I rushed into every build-up too fast. Not making it as impactful as it could have been. I wish I could start from the beginning and give it another go. The whole OP from the start is something I have seen other readers often desire whenever I novels of similar quality. However, my vision was too crude. Behind every good story there is always a build up. A lot of memorable moments in tv shows, movies and even anime is set like that. Like dragon ball z for example. (Don't know if you are familiar with it, but I will give a single, further example just to try an let us see from the same line ;) When Gohan went SS2 against Cell it was considered one of the most memorable moments in the entire series. Why? Because ever since the start, the character Gohan was always a timid and shy boy. He continued to grow emotionally throughout every arc, and always had a moment where he shone. My story, easily said and done, lacks just that! Which I feel I have been more capable of graspin thanks to your honest and well-written review here! :) (not your cup of tea or not, you are not wrong by any means!) As an author, there is nothing which warms my heart more than a huge amount of stars😂 but what use is a high rating if I never truly learn what I can do to make my story better? ;) I am honored that you find good elements inside it, and I am extremely joyful that you enjoyed some of it thus far! However, the fact that there was different points in the story which broke your full interest, tells me that I can most definitely things I could have done better! :) Thank you very much for detailing it out for me, and not just giving me a low rating and telling me it's bad😄 And of course, thank you very much for your time! :) Never really thought my frist novel would get so much recognition. But now that it has, I will make sure to do things properly! :) Thank you for your time! And thank you for your detailed criticism! ;D

I love OP mc even if it senseless. I think its better than having a dumb/stupid/naive mc which can only lead me to frustration. I think i'll give this novel a try, but once a mess up/ annoying romance sub plot appears, i'll have to drop it then. My apologies in advance. Romance/harem is just not my cup of tea.

Although the start is a piece of work, I guarantee you an op crazy mc without any cliche romance or harem.

Cool 👌... Thanks for the info 😁 awesome!!!