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Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv65yr
2019-02-08 18:07

it is a great novel with a great author who reads comments and actually cares about his readers. the story is good, grammar is great as well with only occasional typos but that is nothing that can't be fixed. characters possess their own identity and are not there for the sake of it. stability of updates is great as well with chapters out on every day. Would i recommend this story? Absolutely.

Devolved: Path Of The Beast(novel is being rewritten)

lets_get_this_rice
4.1
83 Chs

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lets_get_this_rice
lets_get_this_riceAuthor

Thank you so much! It is a huge honor to have a reader such as yourself! I Hope you continue to have an incredible experience the rest of the time I write this. And if you don't, then let me know, as I will be more than happy to improve in any way possible! :) Thank you again! :))

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