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AnWanAuthor6yr
2019-01-15 07:50

I am the Author so I am obviously going to praise my novel. It is a very Good Novel.......... ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค๐Ÿ˜ด๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿค’๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿค๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ฐ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿค‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜‡

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FangMingLv5

Harem?

northpoemLv14

Pleas no harem

DrunkenVeinsLv5

horrible novel

DonHitLv6

Harem? ๐Ÿ˜

JLKJLv5

Volunteering to proofread to remove the grammatical errors in this novel .-. The story is good but the english needs some touch up

EpicEvanLv14

I think making the novel from the perspective of the MC is ruining it (can't think of a less harsh way to say it) It also makes the grammar mistakes stand out more

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Does they can have other monster bonds or only one

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Does they can have other monster bonds or only one

VoiD_dEmOnLv11

Does they can have other monster bonds or only one

NaranaLv5

Finally! Congrats for finding editor! Btw does your editor only proof read on the new chapter only?

Bellcross2Lv12

How old is the mc ??

AnWanAuthor

16

Bellcross2:How old is the mc ??
Bellcross2Lv12

Thanks ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…

Ramteke94Lv2

Yes!

Ramteke94Lv2

Yes!

EternalGrowthLv5

Harem?

AnWan:16
LingXian02Lv5

the release sched for this novel is fix?

AnWanAuthor

Yes!

LingXian02:the release sched for this novel is fix?
LingXian02Lv5

weekly or daily?

AnWan:Yes!
AnWanAuthor

Daily.

LingXian02:weekly or daily?
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AzureWolfLv5

This story has interesting concepts but, the grammar is really atrocious. There are other stories on this site that are even worse then this, however, I'm not going to be nice because of this. I understand that some people keep saying in the comments that the writing quality gets better at ch 18 or around ch 32. In the end I could not drag my self across the floor to reach such chapters. One of the main points I don't understand about the author is why if he has an editor already, just ask him to redo all your previous chapters. The author is dragging away potential readers due to not editing his starting chapters. Point 2. I feel like I'm reading a children's book due to all the sound effects. These sound effects take away from a story unless a child is reading them because most children don't know what most stuff sound like. That is why most children's books have the cow goes "moo" or the sheep goes "baa". It gives kids a 3 in 1 training. Training their vocals, reading comprehension and their understanding of what stuff sounds like. Point 2b. As an ***** with the understanding of the English language and sounds. I feel offended when I see a written sound effect. I know what a sword sound makes when it hits something with different densities. It just irks me because its like the author is saying "This is what it sound like to me and you should believe me." No... I don't believe sirens go "siren...siren" or swords go "slice" like their talking. Even the sound effects are off putting. Point 3: The cultivation is strange. I understand that being Original in concept is what authors should do. However, the cultivation with the steam punk vib (engine) and cultivation just don't mix well. I like the part about the soul-bonding, but, it could have been better executed. Point 4: The animals are puppets as far as I can tell. The start of the novel it shows the personality of the creatures and that was a good start, however, right as the soul binding was completed It was like the creatures them selves don't have their own thoughts anymore. It is more along the line as the people turn them into puppets then project their emotions into their soul-bonded puppet to be more like the host. Point 5: The MC does not have a solid goal. Yes, he wants to be in that championship thing but that does not make him insane about doing the most efficient cultivation training which most people fail at. The reason I do not believe this is due to the fact he lived a very normal life with his family. No sane person would tarnish such a thing. If the story showed he had a desire to be recognized due to certain bad pasts then I would believe it more. There are other points I could point out. But I don't know if the author can even read English so adding anymore would just be a waste of time for me and the reader of this wall of text.

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