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fallen_leaf
fallen_leafLv54yr
2020-10-23 01:02

After reading a 1000 ch of this shit. I can say you will go through a rollercoaster of emotions whether you should stop reading this novel and keep wasting your ticket and vote for this novel. The grammar is bad AF. The world building is shit. The character is someone who has inferiority complex and an author who has a sadistic personality. Where others get strong really quickly and there is our mc who even though has many time gotten stronger can't seem to beat this people. The mc is a beta mc a character who lament on the choices he makes All I can say before wasting time and energy for this novel. Just read it somewhere else first. Just Google this shit of a novel you will find 1000+ ch for free to read .There are various sites to choose from. Don't waste it here. P.S. To the author if you read this.

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Olerolin
OlerolinLv15

๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

FQG_TQG
FQG_TQGLv1

I am reading this novel, i feel like I'm torturing myself. Also, you are damn right I am dilemma ,many time I though if I should this or stop this shit . Fu*king , Only if the author had some common sense then it would have been an master piece

fallen_leaf
fallen_leafLv5

Your words are so true

FQG_TQG:I am reading this novel, i feel like I'm torturing myself. Also, you are damn right I am dilemma ,many time I though if I should this or stop this shit . Fu*king , Only if the author had some common sense then it would have been an master piece
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

damn...thx for the save young blood..

fallen_leaf
fallen_leafLv5

Before reading this novel here I highly recommend you to read it on other sites. If you like this novel then read on this site then. But now don't waste you time reading 1000+ ch on this site.

Venom_God:damn...thx for the save young blood..
Ohmy
OhmyLv3

If you managed to reach 1000 chapters then you will see the vast improvement 1000+ And shockingly the story stays interesting without the plot feeling forced. And the author even has a minigame in which you have to work out the correct names of the girls!

cctvWHat
cctvWHatLv5

Hey, any idea when will the MC become OP and not a pussy. If he did become OP at some point, let me know roughly at what chapter cause I'm getting bored of this shit about repetitive training that does make much of a difference among the others.

fallen_leaf
fallen_leafLv5

Sure no problem.

cctvWHat:Hey, any idea when will the MC become OP and not a pussy. If he did become OP at some point, let me know roughly at what chapter cause I'm getting bored of this shit about repetitive training that does make much of a difference among the others.
DaoistwTM0Ad
DaoistwTM0AdLv2

I got bored reading about the potential here, potential of the protagonist everywhere but any secondary character just becomes his friend and becomes more op ... effortlessly ... I read until chapter 1107 it got good for a moment around cap 1000 but it sure repeats itself all over again ... it scares me just thinking about reading the same thing ... mc inferior everywhere

LiquidCallous
LiquidCallousLv3

hippity hoppity your meme is now my property

SPPinkerton
SPPinkertonLv14

you read all they way to 1000 props I dropped it right around chapter 400. This was when chapter 400 was comeing out too. It's nice to know the auther still hates his mc and is bad at writing.

Endless_Night
Endless_NightLv5

Can someone tell me the system of the novel like is it like pokemon or what

fallen_leaf
fallen_leafLv5

Its nothing like Pokemon.

Endless_Night:Can someone tell me the system of the novel like is it like pokemon or what
Endless_Night
Endless_NightLv5

So itโ€™s a shit Show thanks for the heads up

fallen_leaf:Its nothing like Pokemon.
dreamwatcher
dreamwatcherLv4

yeah, the word game is really interesting

Ohmy:If you managed to reach 1000 chapters then you will see the vast improvement 1000+ And shockingly the story stays interesting without the plot feeling forced. And the author even has a minigame in which you have to work out the correct names of the girls!
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15

thanks chief, I'm not into reading about a beta complaining about life

sputnikx01
sputnikx01Lv15

SeaBass
SeaBassLv3

Yeah i never use websites i use powerstones for all of my novels with hundreds of chapters i say sarcasticly

Manoj_Tilija
Manoj_TilijaLv3

Plus mc is basicall santa clauS every resource he obtains after risking his life he shares it. like after the I ruin arc he got out of the ruin all the resources he brought were used by the same girl who is the reason he got stuck then the girl challenges him rather than thanking him. In short Micheal is not the mc of this story he is nust a side char in a story filled with cheat luck mcโ€™s that are his friends

Villain116
Villain116Lv3

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AzureWolf
AzureWolfLv5

This story has interesting concepts but, the grammar is really atrocious. There are other stories on this site that are even worse then this, however, I'm not going to be nice because of this. I understand that some people keep saying in the comments that the writing quality gets better at ch 18 or around ch 32. In the end I could not drag my self across the floor to reach such chapters. One of the main points I don't understand about the author is why if he has an editor already, just ask him to redo all your previous chapters. The author is dragging away potential readers due to not editing his starting chapters. Point 2. I feel like I'm reading a children's book due to all the sound effects. These sound effects take away from a story unless a child is reading them because most children don't know what most stuff sound like. That is why most children's books have the cow goes "moo" or the sheep goes "baa". It gives kids a 3 in 1 training. Training their vocals, reading comprehension and their understanding of what stuff sounds like. Point 2b. As an ***** with the understanding of the English language and sounds. I feel offended when I see a written sound effect. I know what a sword sound makes when it hits something with different densities. It just irks me because its like the author is saying "This is what it sound like to me and you should believe me." No... I don't believe sirens go "siren...siren" or swords go "slice" like their talking. Even the sound effects are off putting. Point 3: The cultivation is strange. I understand that being Original in concept is what authors should do. However, the cultivation with the steam punk vib (engine) and cultivation just don't mix well. I like the part about the soul-bonding, but, it could have been better executed. Point 4: The animals are puppets as far as I can tell. The start of the novel it shows the personality of the creatures and that was a good start, however, right as the soul binding was completed It was like the creatures them selves don't have their own thoughts anymore. It is more along the line as the people turn them into puppets then project their emotions into their soul-bonded puppet to be more like the host. Point 5: The MC does not have a solid goal. Yes, he wants to be in that championship thing but that does not make him insane about doing the most efficient cultivation training which most people fail at. The reason I do not believe this is due to the fact he lived a very normal life with his family. No sane person would tarnish such a thing. If the story showed he had a desire to be recognized due to certain bad pasts then I would believe it more. There are other points I could point out. But I don't know if the author can even read English so adding anymore would just be a waste of time for me and the reader of this wall of text.

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