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Wrafting
WraftingLv26yr
2019-04-01 03:02

Fantastic story and very interesting. I like the uniqueness of this monster training where the monster and the human fuse together and through this give bonuses to each other. This is a bit of a slower story. This is not a story that goes from being and ant to the ruler of the world in less than 150 chapters. I highly suggest reading it and bearing with the small editing issues that they author has at the start of the LN. He does start to get better at it around chapter 20 and then gets an editor to start editing it at about chapter 36. After that the editing gets really good.

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Dimasan
DimasanLv3

AGREE!!!

Leedragon
LeedragonLv15

I would say relatively better when compared to earlier chapters but definitely still has plenty of mistakes that could be fixed and would increase the quality of the story overall.

ayoubridal
ayoubridalLv3

Yep

ayoubridal
ayoubridalLv3

Yep

ayoubridal
ayoubridalLv3

Yep

saleem_ahmee
saleem_ahmeeLv3

That's cool๐Ÿ˜‡

1END1
1END1Lv2

Exp

1END1
1END1Lv2

Exp

Ishan_Rajwade
Ishan_RajwadeLv15

Even in chaper 611, the editing is bad

boogyman23
boogyman23Lv15

Ok well I hope I can bear through chapter 30 bc rn I'm at like 20 and its painful

RedOnWhite
RedOnWhiteLv2

Lol Anthony, is that you?

Aiden_Dover
Aiden_DoverLv12

Ok when he says really good translating after chapter 36 that misleads a lot of people. If the average translation quality is lvl 10 then chapter 1-20 is lvl 3 and after chapter 36 it averages out to be lvl 4 or 5

READER_45
READER_45Lv4

True my friend

alphavires
alphaviresLv15

Exp

alphavires
alphaviresLv15

Exp

F_E_X_A
F_E_X_ALv11

I'll give it a shot

Dragonpokemaster1
Dragonpokemaster1Lv4

It is good in terms of story but the editing is problematic for most people.

OppaiKami
OppaiKamiLv10

you deserve heaven bruh!

boogyman23:Ok well I hope I can bear through chapter 30 bc rn I'm at like 20 and its painful
hck
hckLv14

Exp

Lucien121
Lucien121Lv15

yee

Other Reviews
AzureWolf
AzureWolfLv5

This story has interesting concepts but, the grammar is really atrocious. There are other stories on this site that are even worse then this, however, I'm not going to be nice because of this. I understand that some people keep saying in the comments that the writing quality gets better at ch 18 or around ch 32. In the end I could not drag my self across the floor to reach such chapters. One of the main points I don't understand about the author is why if he has an editor already, just ask him to redo all your previous chapters. The author is dragging away potential readers due to not editing his starting chapters. Point 2. I feel like I'm reading a children's book due to all the sound effects. These sound effects take away from a story unless a child is reading them because most children don't know what most stuff sound like. That is why most children's books have the cow goes "moo" or the sheep goes "baa". It gives kids a 3 in 1 training. Training their vocals, reading comprehension and their understanding of what stuff sounds like. Point 2b. As an ***** with the understanding of the English language and sounds. I feel offended when I see a written sound effect. I know what a sword sound makes when it hits something with different densities. It just irks me because its like the author is saying "This is what it sound like to me and you should believe me." No... I don't believe sirens go "siren...siren" or swords go "slice" like their talking. Even the sound effects are off putting. Point 3: The cultivation is strange. I understand that being Original in concept is what authors should do. However, the cultivation with the steam punk vib (engine) and cultivation just don't mix well. I like the part about the soul-bonding, but, it could have been better executed. Point 4: The animals are puppets as far as I can tell. The start of the novel it shows the personality of the creatures and that was a good start, however, right as the soul binding was completed It was like the creatures them selves don't have their own thoughts anymore. It is more along the line as the people turn them into puppets then project their emotions into their soul-bonded puppet to be more like the host. Point 5: The MC does not have a solid goal. Yes, he wants to be in that championship thing but that does not make him insane about doing the most efficient cultivation training which most people fail at. The reason I do not believe this is due to the fact he lived a very normal life with his family. No sane person would tarnish such a thing. If the story showed he had a desire to be recognized due to certain bad pasts then I would believe it more. There are other points I could point out. But I don't know if the author can even read English so adding anymore would just be a waste of time for me and the reader of this wall of text.

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