First of all, I really like the setup of the Story. I think its brilliantly done. One of the best of all original Novels I've read. SPOILERS starting here. My short summary of the main points: The MC grows up in a world where people are able to bond with monsters upon graduation from school to increase their own powers. Even though he was offered a monster with high potential due to his academic achievements, he chose one raised by his own family with less potential and weaker ability's as he did not want to join an Organisation. He starts to cultivate the "supreme combat exercise", strengthening his own body to overcome the lacking potential of his bonded monster while enduring the pain that comes together with using this technique. His monster gets stronger as he levels up the "supreme combat exercise" as they share a symbiotic relationship. He travels to the most dangerous city of the continent after graduation to quicken up his cultivation to achieve his goal, which is to participate in a tournament five years later. From that point on until the most recent chapters he starts to regularly hunt monsters to increase his strength and accumulate wealth, with some twists happening while hunting those monsters. The bonded monster of the MC, while weak, turns out to possess the ability to identify natural treasures while adventuring, giving hope that those treasures can be used to power them up. There are a few points stopping me from enjoying the novel fully. The grammar is really bad. Even though there is a proofreader starting from chapter 36 (not sure which chapter it was exactly), the quality of the story does not go up substantially. The storyline is nicely thought through but the character growth in terms of power is lacking. When it seems that MC grew substantially, all the other characters that he is currently interacting with seem to have grown even more, resulting in a seemingly weak MC that is depending on the protection of the other characters. The novel has gone premium yesterday which I can completely understand because it is a great story and good performance should be rewarded. But the quality of writing needs to go up steeply to justify fee-based chapters. For those that read up until here: All in all a great story with potential but held back by the bad grammar, nonetheless worth reading.
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Thanks for the in depth review
forgot to add that MC has a woman'o'culture (ツ) as his bestie.. Would there be an arc on it or it'll end as a forgotten plot ? Been on the path of monster integration for awhile n I'm quite hooked, need to know if it'll be worth it to spend some coins on... spoilers accepted too my gratitudes fellow daoists☺️
hope that the grammar will improve. i noticed that chapters are becoming shorter. i love the plot but kindly remove the cooking and eating part in every chapter. its frustrating, honestly. keep it up and good job
Of course the MC will be weaker than his friends. Considering, the fact that he chosed a monster with low talent/potential. Plus, he’s not in any organization. So, he cant get the materails or money he needs in his disposal. He has to works hard to get it: Nearly dying because of it. (But plot armor), Asking his friends or just never getting it. The only reason he can boost his potential by tons is the poses he uses and his engine. Thats still not enough so the story has to go on by him being stronger. How do you do that? By making the MC do their daily task and by unfortunate Circumstances, find a treasure/skill thats powerful but with some risk. Either fighting a powerful moster or human. Meanwhile, his friends will train with the materails, treasures, training scriptures, and Etc. Provided by their safe organization with someone strong backing them. Of course, its not free. In which they have to do missions. albeit, with some risk. They might not gain as much battle exprience as the MC but they’re much powerful than him. Which, can be use as their advantage. Of course, the MC might find a way to defeat them by a “risky move” that “might cost his life” again, plot armor. Would I recommend you guys to read it? Read around 30ish chapters and drop it if you don’t like it.
Also, In many novels the MC is backed by someone strong in which the MC is allowed to do more things. So, having his friends protect him isnt a bad thing. But he needs to know that he can’t rely on one person for every conflict (which he does sometimes) in other novels the MC trains for some years and becomes stronger than their gurdian/protecter. In which the MC repays them in one way. I know that in the future the MC will become stronger than his friends (in some bizarre way) and probably benifit them.
ReverseMangaBroz:Of course the MC will be weaker than his friends. Considering, the fact that he chosed a monster with low talent/potential. Plus, he’s not in any organization. So, he cant get the materails or money he needs in his disposal. He has to works hard to get it: Nearly dying because of it. (But plot armor), Asking his friends or just never getting it. The only reason he can boost his potential by tons is the poses he uses and his engine. Thats still not enough so the story has to go on by him being stronger. How do you do that? By making the MC do their daily task and by unfortunate Circumstances, find a treasure/skill thats powerful but with some risk. Either fighting a powerful moster or human. Meanwhile, his friends will train with the materails, treasures, training scriptures, and Etc. Provided by their safe organization with someone strong backing them. Of course, its not free. In which they have to do missions. albeit, with some risk. They might not gain as much battle exprience as the MC but they’re much powerful than him. Which, can be use as their advantage. Of course, the MC might find a way to defeat them by a “risky move” that “might cost his life” again, plot armor. Would I recommend you guys to read it? Read around 30ish chapters and drop it if you don’t like it.
does he get other monsters or is it only ashlyn? i am torn between reading this book further mostly due to the translation XD
Try out the novel. Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled. This is really a great and awesome novel. Truly one of a kind that I believe is unfair for others nit to see. I hope we can all support this novel. You will all love it without a doubt, just give it a chance. I really love this novel, and I think the author has more greater things installed for us. Thanks a lot.
