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The Vice Captain of the WhiteBeard Pirates

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What is The Vice Captain of the WhiteBeard Pirates

Leia o romance The Vice Captain of the WhiteBeard Pirates escrito pelo autor Leo_DiAngelo publicado no WebNovel. In the Desolate world of one piece, a young man finds himself wrapped right in the middle of it all. Follow him as he follows his captain and proclaimed "Father" Whitebeard as they explore the sea, fi...

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In the Desolate world of one piece, a young man finds himself wrapped right in the middle of it all. Follow him as he follows his captain and proclaimed "Father" Whitebeard as they explore the sea, fight pirates, marines and God knows what in this fan fiction web series. DISCLAIMER : I DO NOT OWN ANY OF THE CHARACTERS FROM THE ONE PIECE ANIME OR MANGA EXCEPT FOR THE OC. THIS IS MY FIRST NOVEL, PLEASE LEAVE A REVIEW ON WHETHER I COOKED OR NOT. MUCH LOVE

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"Hi. I'm Shera Rose. My life wasn't perfect before his arrival but it turned into a mess after his arrival." "Hey, I'm Ace. (whispering) My life was hell before her arrival but she turned it to heaven." "Hey..... What are you whispering?" Shera asked. "Nothing my sweet Lilith" Ace said. "First of all, I'm not the queen of hell. So stop calling me in that name. Secondly, his name isn't Ace. It's......."Ace cut off her. "Hey. wait. You can't say it to anyone."Ace said. "Oh! Baby, are you embarrassed?"Shera asked in a mocking tone. "You, just wait there. I will show you who will embarrass you in the end" Ace said while smiling mischievously. "Wa..it....wa...wait....Ac...Ac...e.I don't mean to make you angry. I....just want to have fun," Shera said. An electric shock went through her body when Ace came toward her. "Oh! Is that so? So....let me also have fun."Ace said while tracing her nape from his nose. "Wait..Ah...I'm...sorry...sorry...I..ma.de..a..mis..take..forgive...me..Ah..plea..see.." Shera pleaded while shivering under his touches. "OK then. Do you admit your mistake?"Ace asked her. His hot breath was fanning her bare neck. "Yes..yes...I admit."Shera said in a hurry. "Then obey the punishment."Ace said. He went in front of Shera and glanced at her eyes directly. 'Oh! man. Is she an enchantress? Why on the earth do I lose my self-control wherever I look into her eyes. Anyway I must teach some manners to this kitten' Shera was staring at Ace innocently. "Honey, please....."Shera pleaded while staring at him with puppy eyes. Ace smirked at her. "My sweet Lillith, it's too late to apologises and also don't you want to touch my abs?"Ace asked with a foxy look. Shera blushed from his words. "You...You... pervert.... shameless..." Shera said with an angry voice. "Oh! Pervert!? Shameless? Is that so? Then I will show you how shameless I can be..."Ace said. He bent toward Shera. He put his hands under her thighs & back, lifting her in bride style. Shera was shocked. His cold hands went under her dress, touching her bare thigh. A chill went through her spine. "What....tt....ar..e...y..ou...do....in...g?????"Shera asked while trembling. "OH!! My Lillith, Don't tell me you're already excited or do you think it's better to do it on the sofa than on the bed? Whatever the place, I'll be at your service" Ace said while grinning. Shera turned into a brighter shade of red. "Don't worry my Lillith, I will carry you to ''our bedroom'' and I'll make sure you are comfortable. Just wait a little longer, sweetheart." He said emphasising 'our bedroom' while carrying her through the stairs. 'I'm sorry' Shera thought. *************** 'When others couples equal them to Romeo Juliet, Jake Rose, Shah Jahan Mumtaz Mahal I have to become Lillith(queen of the hell) while the person who thinks he is my lover become Asmodeus (king of the hell). The simple meaning of that is we are the rulers of hell. Can you imagine the mentality of this person? He is annoying. I also can't understand what is the relationship between us but somehow I'm addicted to him. I'll follow him blindly. Sometimes his love is too much to the point it makes my blood boil hotter than a fiery sea but somehow, in the end, I'm the one who laughs till my stomach hurts. It's because of his craziness. Calmness is a sign before a storm, just like that storms are bound to come to our peaceful world. Will we be shattered from these storms? or will we show the strength of our bond? But what's the bond between us? What is the purpose of these wars? Why should we fight? Time is the best solution to all of these questions. I will let time to solve them.' ~Shera Rose~ ''I don't mean to disrespect any belief or religion. I just need to let u understand the story. I got all this information from the internet. Luv u. Stay safe, stay healthy.'' -Shelley Richard-

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AlanCee
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Only read if you’re bored, I read up to ch.12. Mc starts off stranded on an island at age 9, eats a zoan devil fruit (ghidorah version), and somehow easily awakens all 3 aspects of haki and also awakens his fruit before he’s 15. Whitebeard and Big Mom land on his island and they instantly fight after tiny dialogue, meets Xebec and gets roped into joining the crew. Also the mc doesn’t remember his name just because, (No explanation for that) and then Xebec gives him a name. Word count is too low per chapter, grammar is barely average, paragraphs are thick blocks of text. Author doesn’t differentiate between talking and thinking, characters are super bland, every interaction between people is so basic it hurts to read. Ex: (Whitebeard looks at me funny. “Let’s fight gurarara” laughing just because.) There is so little context and the mc just looks dumb trying to fight whitebeard, big mom, sengoku, etc at the beginning chapters.

Passerby_Venne
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The story is really well written, a great start so far and enjoyable... there's just one major flaw that I recommend that the author fixes. The paragraphs are really long, making it straining for the eyes and hard to read. there are unnecessarily long paragraphs that are like a running text that flows without end. When I started out writing fanfics, that was the first error I committed that I had to learn to fix, and if you the author can correct this, you'll have very popular stories in the future based on what you've written so far. Yes, I did write this review in one long paragraph, running text, to make a point. below, I'll write the exact thing I did do far, but with smaller paragraphs as an example. ------- The story is really well written, a great start so far and enjoyable... There's just one major flaw that I recommend that the author fixes. The paragraphs are really long, making it straining for the eyes, and hard to read. There are unnecessarily long paragraphs, that are like a running text that flows without end. When I started out writing fanfics, that was the first error I committed that I had to learn to fix, and if you the author can correct this, you'll have very popular stories in the future based on what you've written so far. This should have been much easier to read and understand, hopefully, you got my point. 3.9/5 and if you correct the paragraphs, It'll be a 4.3/5.

Bob_Bob_8597
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Interesting novel so far with good grammar and spelling. I like that you didn’t choose Marco and made your own character as whitebeards vice captain

zNoir
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I really liked the story, keep it up Mr. Author 🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️🗣️

Rinchan7
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Just happened to come across this one and I have to say that this was an amazing read so far. Great writing, highly recommended to give it a read.

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applo43
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Bro,keep it up your doing great. And I have to say I personally like it

Ozerist
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Not my cup of coffee but maybe u guys might like it Try reading for 5-10 chapters

Noland29
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LET. HIM. COOOOOOK amazing fanfic idea

Sterky67
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me gusto espero que no lo abandones ni te quedes sin ideas [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Goce_Delcev
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very good and interesting story with fast updates.

DaoistEQ1qe7
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História interessante,principalmente por começar na época dos monstros antigos mas algo que poderia mudar era a personalidade do MC,tudo bem ele ser dorminhoco e tals isso até vai,mas ele ficar falando desse jeito arrastado é muito estranho dava para sei lá fazer o marco "curar" esse problema do MC ou encontrar um médico para isso pq um cara tão forte falando desse jeito é bizarro e sem graça

Tim_QQQ
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written well. mc acts a little autistic due to merging? with the kaiju devil fruits personality. the story starts at the rocks era which is always fun to read. its a bit of a crack fic as the mc gains strength very fast and dosent focus at all on training. brief mentions of it if anything. if thats your thing this is a fun read .

Obito122
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Name of navol???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????..l,l,,,,,,,,,,,…,.,……………..,…………………………………….,ll,l,.ll.l….,,,,,,,,,…..

kishizawa_Hiiro
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Void_Overlords
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to me this story is one of the best i read

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