Thank you for the honest review! I will surely rewrite some of my chapters once I have a time :)

I forgot to include my review! The story was great, character was well develope and the world was very interesting. I only have some issue about how the story unfold which is sometimes a little bit predictable so I hope you will include some surprising moments in your future chapters, also more exploration pleeaseee. It was a great book made by the author, you can really sense the efforts given by the author when writing this book

It was an amazing book with amazing characters and good story development. Great writing and also Great story plot, im just hoping to experience more surprising moments because of your story and genre, sometimes the story was getting a little bit predictive thats. But overall, it was a great , intriguing and interesting book with a bunch of good and relatable characters

Fantasy genre is my favorite in terms of books and movies, which means I have a high standard on reviewing this kind of stories. The story was very well thought of, the characters was well developed but still need some time in order to make the readers care for them, while the world which is the most important part of fantasy genre books and movies is kinda lacking. Yes theres some parts where you are able to tell us what it was but i suggest to make it more alive, let the characters spend more time with the world and try exploring it. Overall this was a great book! Good job for the author

The story development, Is good and the character development was good too. Its too early to expect for surprises thats why I cant review it deeper.. it was a bery interesting book, and for this kinds of story im expecting some major twist that isnt too predictable okie. Overall keep up the great work. Ill be putting this on my library

The story is intruiging and Interesting. Yes the characyer development is good same as the grammar, but the story is pretty predictable. I hope you can give some unexpected moments specially some twist that will change the faith of the characters drastically, so that they can feel more humane. But overall it was an amazing work! Good job writer...

The only complain I could give was the lack of world exploring. But overall it was a good story for sports lovers, good story arc, good writing, good character development.

Thank you for an honest reply, I will surely change that on my future chapters. After finishing my book, I'll be rewriting my previous chapters so that I can change that, thank you :)

Very interesting story, character and world. But I hope you can make it feel more alive by making the characters explore the world while giving them enough parts to develop in order for the readers to feel them...

This book was amazing, I can see the effort that the author gave in order to write every chapter. The way how you develop the characters was excellent, as a fellow writer I learned a lot on how to develop a character well. For the story it was interesting but a little predictable. Im expecting a much more intriguing story line in your future chapters

Very interesting story, good character development and great story flow. The only thing I can suggest was to keep the consistency of your story. If you can make more character development, try it because your characters in the story is one of the most important part in the plot that you wanted to have... thats all

Your book is pretty interesting, The only suggestion I may suggest was about your character development. Make more character development so that the readers will be able to care more deeply for the characters

Sadly I was able to start slowly, But thank you so much for giving my work some consideration. I will make all the future chapters as good as possible thank you

it's actually too early for me to give a review because you only got 4 chapters, It is fine though, The way how your story progress was pretty interesting, and the way how the characters were developed were pretty good too. Consistency and more Character development is what I can suggest in your future chapter! Good luck!

Thank you for the review! I hope you'll like my future chapters

The book is great, has great storyline and great character development, it's simple yet intriguing sometimes. I can actually agree to other reviews that you need to explore the world more, give more life and also give a more character development, for some reason I felt that the story was a little fast that's why you can't fit more character development between the chapter, but I hope you can make some in the future so that we can feel the characters more

Fantasy/adventure is my thing specially on video games and movies, so after knowing that your book is a fantasy/adventure I was like "I have to try this..", after reading your 20th chapter I noticed that the flow of the book is good, sometimes it was was sometimes it was slow, character development is good too. but just like the other book I've in webnovel so far, I suggest putting more twist in the story, sometimes it's a little predictable... That's all :) great work to the author

Thank you so much for the great review! I hope you stick with me for my future updates as well as my new coming work

I found another person noticing that I'm overly relying on my that phrase in order to express my characters thoughts.. I'll change that in my future updates :) and after I finish the book, I'll do some rewrite on my previous chapters. Thanks for the comment! I'm glad grammar is no longer my main problem

Goodluck!