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The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

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What is The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Baca novel The Immortal (twilight fanfiction) yang ditulis oleh penulis Beans_on_a_tree yang diterbitkan di WebNovel. "An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of t...

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"An everyday man gets thrown into the world of twilight thousands of years before the start of the plot. With immortality and incredible abilities. How will this man's presence change the outcome of the original story?" [ this is a slow-burn fanfiction; the MC is just trying to experience life and enjoy it, not to take over the world and rule from the shadows.] I do not own twilight or the characters of the twilight world, all that belongs to me are my own characters.

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Welcome To The Afterlife

The difference between life and death is a fine line. Evan Shadows; A 19 year old boy who finds his way into another world after dying in a tragic accident. In the world of Neodeka there are horrifying monsters, dragons, and ofcourse pretty girls. Though, after getting scratched by a terrifying creature, it seems he must set out on a quest with his new friends to find something called a 'Life Crystal' before he starts to turn into one of those monsters! --------------------------------------------------------- Continuing In Volume 2 Evan Shadows and his friends finally defeated the evil dragon Atsuko the world of Neodeka broke apart. Everyone was separated in the fall, ending up in yet another strange world. The world of Jigoku. A kingdom preparing for war under their king Goliath A.K.A Sadako's father. Evan, Sadako and Basa are alone on their journey thus getting to know one another and becoming trusted allies. Avery Volk has been on a rampage in the world of the living for 2 years, torn up over the loss of his beloved Blair. Until one fateful day an old friend shows up with news for hope, a way to save Blair, revive her from the Phantom realm. Unfortunately, Avery will have to face Goliath himself in order to get Blair back. Though, Goliath seems to know Avery even though they never met before, or so Avery thought... Lyran Ichihara comes into contact with a handsome boy with wings. Though they get along just fine, he doesn't want to tell Lyran his real name for some reason. Instead, he goes under the alias 'Angel'. They travel the wasteland in search of the rest of Lyran's party into the town of Selina which is cut off from the overbearing rule of the demon king Goliath. A mysterious time traveler has come from the future with an ominous message, Evan, Avery, Sadako, Basa, Cera, Jericho, Lyran and Angel find themselves in the middle of a conflict between two nations. what's worse is their combined strength wasn't even enough to take down one man. Jesshira the Dark Chimera is the reincarnation of Anubis. Jesshira has teamed up with vampire Lord Damien. There seems to be some unexpected ties forming. Read to find out what happens as some relationships form and some tear away. Also, a new life is created. ------------ [ Sadako The Demon Of Neodeka ] The tale of the life of the daughter of the king. She was cast out of the castle at a young age and forced to work to make ends meet. This poor lonely girl would one day become the powerful demon known as Sadako Gravestone.

Lyranichi · Fantasi
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The iDOLM@STER: Unison Voice

"Dear Diary, today I met a man who may make my dreams come true. N… not like that! I finally found a new talent agency!" Kanagawa Hana has been an idol for two years, although she hadn’t found much success throughout it. After being scouted by the Producer of 765 Productions, she was given a second chance in becoming a top star. There isn’t a day where a member of 765 Productions’ All Stars or Million Stars isn’t seen on TV, radio, or magazine, meaning that this company is a serious business. 765’s newest project, Supernova!!! is a new concept featuring a brand new cast of girls with varying skills and ages, including Hana. For the first time in over a year, she has a place to call her home in the idol world. There will be challenges in having a fresh start at a new company, but she has 52 other idols to look up to. Hopefully, they can help her with overcoming what held her back in the past. An idol who will stop at nothing to reach the top. Ever since she was nine years old, Fukuyama Reina wanted to be a top idol. At the age of seventeen, she is joining her seventh production company, 765 Productions. To Reina, 765 Pro is just another stepping stone to bigger and better companies, so making friends or enemies along the way doesn’t matter to her. If she can be successful with the Neo Stars, then there is no doubt that she will be able to move on to better things. It’s a goal that she doesn’t need to make friends in order to achieve. A brand new chapter in the IDOLM@STER franchise, with a fresh cast of shining stars!

ALien · Komik
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Dungeon Assassin

Ashton, the leading assassin of Avarice, the worlds largest underground organization is on his last mission before his retirement. Suddenly, after finishing his mission, he sees a bright light coming towards him and quickly dodges. “It’s a truck? But I’m 5 stories above ground?!” Suddenly the truck turned around in what seemed to be an instant and began speeding directly at him. He was unable to dodge as it was somehow already in front of him. He felt the impact, but only for a second before all the sensations began to leave his body. ‘So, I’m dead… but, why can I think?’ He opened his eyes and saw a room that looked like a mix between old English and modern style. “I’m alive?” He noticed that his voice sounded like that of a young man, but didn’t take much note of it as he had just awoken. He looked around as he got up from the bed he slept on. “Where am I?” Ashton said this aloud although there was no one to hear it. He saw a mirror on the opposite side of the room and used it to check the current state of his body. In the mirror, however, was someone else, it wasn’t him. The mirror portrayed a young, handsome man with short, white hair and darkish red eyes, who appeared to be around 15-16 years old. “Is that me?” He didn’t know why he appeared as someone so young, but when he thought about last night’s incident… He understood pretty quickly. “I’ve transmigrated.” *** I’ve never really written a novel before so please be patient with me. Please tell me in the comments if you dislike anything and I’ll try to fix it. *** The quality of the writing probably won’t be any good but it’s probably better than the translation from Chinese Novels. Lol

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SpeedyG
SpeedyGLv10SpeedyG

This story is awesome, is original and plot makes sense, right amount of time skip w/o leaving unexplained gaps. It keeps you engaged in every chapter...

war777
war777Lv14war777

really excited to read more! one of the few twilight fanfic's that adds to the wold.

Apollocus
ApollocusLv13Apollocus

It's quite good even I like the set up at the start and he seems pretty realistic as a person. I saw some people saying that oh he has no ambition and why did he learn to fight only after fighting a vampire. Well it's plain and simple, he can't die and it isn't even the start of the original twilight series we are still in old times and right now he is just enjoying life and what is currently happening is just the set up. Now for the fighting, that was the first vampire he fought and everything before that he could just one shot since he can't die. Like you can't tell you need something until you experience failure that shows what needs to be improved and how you can improve your weaknesses. All in all very good and I want more chapters.

mow
mowLv4mow

Not for me, the MC lacks ambition its just boring, dude spent over a thousand years doing nothing but living in tribes and did not even bother to learn any combat arts until after his first vampire fight. I honestly see no point in putting him this far before canon cuz he's doing nothing with his thousand years beside learning combat arts now and going around healing humans. If someone is this far back I expected some form of legacy being created like a Kingdom or a very strong Clan of descendants but nah its just yapping until canon finally arrives.

BookDragonling
BookDragonlingLv4BookDragonling

The author isn't lying when they say 'average writing'. The grammar is fine but expect inconsistencies and an incompetent and dumb MC. He hides from a vampire, a vampire that should be able to hear his heartbeat and smell him. After being alive for over a thousand years he states that he still doesn't know how to fight and only decides to learn after fighting and killing a vampire. He learns how to use weapons even though the only thing that can hurt a vampire is another vampire. So many other things but you get the point.

Beans_on_a_tree
Beans_on_a_treePenulisBeans_on_a_tree

What can I say? 😘 ----------------------

Raventan
RaventanLv13Raventan

live more than 1000+ year but master of none even trash these day better than this if they have that much time you try to write this you should make it better mc if this keep going to the way of modern time MC can only be beggar or homeless with this MC kind of mindset he will achieve nothing

Otaku_Brasileiro
Otaku_BrasileiroLv1Otaku_Brasileiro

I really liked this fanfic but it takes a long time to update, I highly recommend this fanfic. Could update faster since this fanfic has a future

theanimemail
theanimemailLv10theanimemail

So, this story has quite a few issues: comma usage is minimal, which leads the writing to feel quite stilted (note: a common issue for novels on here); characters' appearances and clothing aren't described, which was really prevalent to me since I've never really watched the show or read the books (note 2: this is one of the biggest issues so far); the world and the MC surroundings are only given barebones descriptions, which makes most of the scenes pretty bland to read about, most aspects of the MC's journey are skimmed, which, while making for good pacing, makes his thousands of years of life seem kinda inconsequential and impactful to his base personality and thought processes (Note 3: I'd have liked the author to go into more depth when it comes to some of the stuff the MC has seen over the years; I want to know what large settlements in China looked like and the peoples culture from the MC's perspective, what the top of mount Everest looked like). So, in summary, while I'd only tentatively recommend this book, I really hope to see the author steadily improve his writing skills as this fiction continues. P.S., please use the Grammarly + Quilbot method I mentioned in the comments.

Humbuub
HumbuubLv4Humbuub

4-5-3-2-5. The earlier chapters have some redundant paragraphs, it did get better. I enjoy the pacing so far, kinda reminds me of that Eternals fanfic. The MC is a bit bland, the emotional dampeners ruin any chance of character development. The updates are inconsistent and on the slow side.

Child_of_Azathoth
Child_of_AzathothLv4Child_of_Azathoth

well, never thought I'd find myself reading and enjoying twilight fanfiction... but here we are.

IzzyApproved
IzzyApprovedLv4IzzyApproved

well written,hope the update is consistent

Storm20074
Storm20074Lv13Storm20074

Love the story so far. I have seen Twilight but not enough to know the story. Even then though it is quite easy to follow and still enjoyable.

behind_your_sister
behind_your_sisterLv3behind_your_sister

BEST TWILIGHT FANFIC .............................................(I WANT SOME TWILIGHT FANFIC RECOMMENDATIONS)........................................

funny_lol
funny_lolLv1funny_lol

I thought he would try to become stronger, but no, he does not train, does not test his body for strength at all, it is not clear why?! I thought he wouldn 't shoot everywhere , but would open his intelligence to know about everything, he has money but he doesn 't actually use it. Does it make sense to have a lot of money and guard it? Couldn't he have trained vampire hunters? He couldn't use money to change the Bible about himself?! it seems like a normal plot , but a lot of things are missing from where did the vampires come from ? Are there any magicians? Where are the werewolves? Vampires would hardly have appeared without magic! In short, does the author want to make hidden enemies for our gg? but where does he have enemies , what nonsense did the author come up with ? how much do I know at dusk vampires seem to take strength from blood so that it's nonsense that vampires burn from his blood))

MarkJr
MarkJrLv1MarkJr

The story is super great! Its just, The MC described and the coverart MC differs. I mean, The MC inside is tall, masculine, chad like handsome, the coverart looks dwork still a 4.8 stars

Novel_Lover_2360
Novel_Lover_2360Lv3Novel_Lover_2360

One of the best... No, the best twilight fanfic so far, keep the good work man 👍.................... Oh and please no rosalie or alice or any vampire uf you can just a shapeshifter will be a good choice

SpeedyG
SpeedyGLv10SpeedyG

deadimp
deadimpLv13deadimp

great story so far cant wait for more chapters. the story is great, and the background makes it more enjoyable, and i like that it is not rushed to get to the main story. i like how he is unique, not a wearwolf or vampire

Mike_Davis
Mike_DavisLv13Mike_Davis

Refreshing fun, read. Very well written. Definitely recommend reading.

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