The author isn't lying when they say 'average writing'. The grammar is fine but expect inconsistencies and an incompetent and dumb MC. He hides from a vampire, a vampire that should be able to hear his heartbeat and smell him. After being alive for over a thousand years he states that he still doesn't know how to fight and only decides to learn after fighting and killing a vampire. He learns how to use weapons even though the only thing that can hurt a vampire is another vampire. So many other things but you get the point.
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imagine my friend. When we use to life with bug where they can die just from our step, how can you learn to fight and thats 4000 bc. I dont even think there is a lot matrial arts to learn teoritically. and why he just decide to learn fight when meet the vampire? because they had similiar power not just bug anymore, so he can measure how much power he has compare to other. I think it still make sense
It would make sense in the modern world, but as the MC was reincarnated thousands of years before, in times where the world wasn't so safe, it doesn't make sense that the MC never learned to fight since as an Immortal he couldn't stay in one place for long and would need to move every few years in a time where traveling was not safe. Furthermore, it is simply stupid for an immortal not to learn to defend himself since it is a fact that he will eventually end up in some trouble unless he lives in a cave. I'm not going to say that it's impossible for the MC to have lived thousands of years without fighting, but it seems extremely unlikely.
Imamaminoto:imagine my friend. When we use to life with bug where they can die just from our step, how can you learn to fight and thats 4000 bc. I dont even think there is a lot matrial arts to learn teoritically. and why he just decide to learn fight when meet the vampire? because they had similiar power not just bug anymore, so he can measure how much power he has compare to other. I think it still make sense
Pointy things are good, pointy things on sticks are better, wood to stop other people's pointy things from getting you... All things I would expect a guy in the ancient past living to be a thousand years old to know well.
he did fight but just regulare humans that die in seconds so not much to learn from that like what would you learn fighting a toddler with the strength of a bear on your side bro litterly just fought like a street fighter with no flow or plan
Spelloyal:It would make sense in the modern world, but as the MC was reincarnated thousands of years before, in times where the world wasn't so safe, it doesn't make sense that the MC never learned to fight since as an Immortal he couldn't stay in one place for long and would need to move every few years in a time where traveling was not safe. Furthermore, it is simply stupid for an immortal not to learn to defend himself since it is a fact that he will eventually end up in some trouble unless he lives in a cave. I'm not going to say that it's impossible for the MC to have lived thousands of years without fighting, but it seems extremely unlikely.
i agree he is in a world of blood suckers snd magic even though he is lazy he is bound to learn to defend himself
Spelloyal:It would make sense in the modern world, but as the MC was reincarnated thousands of years before, in times where the world wasn't so safe, it doesn't make sense that the MC never learned to fight since as an Immortal he couldn't stay in one place for long and would need to move every few years in a time where traveling was not safe. Furthermore, it is simply stupid for an immortal not to learn to defend himself since it is a fact that he will eventually end up in some trouble unless he lives in a cave. I'm not going to say that it's impossible for the MC to have lived thousands of years without fighting, but it seems extremely unlikely.
