Dragon Ball: Back in Black

A Legend had died. Rest in Peace, Akira Toriyama

The story is fine overall. But I would recommend author to change the first chapter as it was not a good impression overall. To me he felt like a entitled Chinese young master with all his complaints. The rest of the story is good. The character interactions are interesting and he is not a two dimensional character which is great. I would recommend the author to make his own original storylines and not follow the canon too much. Maybe explore magic which is inherent in db universe. You can also add interactions with other aliens that we had not seen otherwise in canon like tuffles. Add your own lore if you want to like him meeting yamoshi and other cool and og stuff. Instead of following the same cliches that everyone seems to follow. Give your own twist to evolution of Saiyan and including stuff from gt and xenoverse and all that good stuff to make it more interesting to us readers. These are just my suggestions. Peace.

someone named Novel Audio Forge is stealing your story and making audio books out of it in YouTube and patreon.

I was skeptical at first due to the fact that I haven’t found a single Dragonball fic that doesn’t fall flat on its face or just retcon everything. However this fic has been amazing so far. The Author clearly knows ALOT about Dragonball lore and is very meticulous with the little details and I absolutely love it. Even though I’m not a fan of harems; this novel has been more than generous with everything else that I would recommend everyone at least give it a try.

Excellent Oc's backstory: From an ordinary non-nonsense man to Goku-Black's new successor and Goku and Raditz's brother. I hope that you can continue with this story and take some time to rest as well. Great job.

I'm giving it 5 stars but I couldn't read it, I didn't like the MC, it's weak even though I know the work, I'm going to wait to accumulate about 70 chapters to read again, although I think the author will give up on the fanfic before then

Author tries to create moments of tension where there is no time for it, an example of this is the MC facing opponents who are strong for his base form, but in his oozaru form would be easily resolved.

Really nice concept and grammar , really hope u continue

cooler is more intelligent and stronger than frieza and unlike frieza he believes in quality instead of 1000 soldiers he prefers 10 with intelligence and strength compared and unlike frieza who doesn't care about his soldiers killing him just because he wants cooler makes his soldiers train to become stronger and smarter at the same time that they gain better equipment cooler treats his soldiers and subordinates like soldiers the greater their achievements and loyalty the better their rewards he is polite and believes in loyalty he will not kill someone because He wants he needs a strong reason to eliminate a useful soldier unlike Freeza who is basically a spoiled and childish person that's why Cooler is more liked and loved by the fans than Freeza it's a shame he wasn't canon who knows with Toyotaro in command of dragon ball he doesn't bring coola and even bojack to the canon

My first review is for you ...and this is excellent, I really love the overall scene you created. Can't wait for next chapters

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very good story, i like the plot and the characters. So..., good work author. [img=recomendar][img=actualizar][img=recomendar][img=actualizar]

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A really good fanfic on all levels. The main character isn't some cookie cutter piece of wood, and the 'side' characters are actually interesting.

liked the fic and an Db fic but all ends in about 50< less chaps so not much hope on future stability author lmk whats your ideal chap before hiatus/or end?

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The grammar is good, almost having no mistakes as far as I can tell. The story itself though I didn't quite like as it was too boring and simple for my taste, especially the talk with the god granting him his wishes and sending him to reincarnate. I have only read the first few chapters so maybe later on it became better, I don't know.

De las mejores historias que he leído de Dragon Ball. A pesar de tener toques originales es muy interesante, coherente y con pocos o ningun hueco argumental. Aunque quisiera saber qué sucede después no puedo lograr imaginar el dolor y la impotencia que tiene el autor. Es entendible si no logra encontrar inspiración para escribir más. Solo espero que él y su familia logren sobrellevar todo bien ♥️

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Great story, uniquish origin story. definitely a quality piece overall. The MC is pretty basic though. definitely the cliche standard everyone on this app likes tho. The fake reincarnator from our world who doesn't mind killing, is a low key battle junkie, and isn't a maniac. just really forced bull that became the norm because sad folk on here don't have any backbone in real life, so they live vicariously. he only likes his family, doesn't care about anything else except training, and lacks any moral compass. just an overpowered NPC basically but I only say it negatively because it seems like every fanfic follows this same pattern presently. Other than that an enjoyable story.