Luizz_Ricardo

I dropped it the moment you wrote Mikoto's appearance, Uchiha doesn't have red eyes but black ones, they only turn red when he activates his kekkei genkai, you don't even know that and dare to write about Naruto, by the way the bell test is passed on in generations of Hokage and his disciples

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I thought this fanfit had potential, but as you read on you see that the protagonist hasn't watched Naruto properly, and the writing is boring.

author make the protagonist go to the invincible universe

Why so many OC characters, it took away the fun of the story

author and prejudiced, in fact there is a lack of development in the story

exactly, the story is getting boring already

Author I had an idea that will make the protagonist very strong and have a great explanation, as we saw in Jujutsu Kaisen Sukuna can take over other people's bodies, and of course it has its limits and script, but I was here thinking, why doesn't the protagonist try to take over the body of some Viltrumite, use his fingers or anything for everyone to transfer their abilities and soul to a Viltrumite and steal their body.

essa história ficou muito interessante