PAX69

no matter the quality of the translation, a Chinese fic will never deserve a rating above 4.4 stars, this chapter is an example

This chapter was very funny

Author: Will the protagonist have the senjutsu chakra of the six paths plus the rikudou mode? By the way, what is the special ability of the protagonist's rinnegan? After all, every rinnegan has a unique ability. Madara's rinnegan has the limbo. Sasuke has the supreme rinnegan, which he can use to switch places with anything, plus portals to another dimension.

To be honest, the story is good but the pace is very, very slow, it gets boring as time goes by.

I've read 10 chapters so far and my opinion about this fanfic is: writing and grammar 10/10, the author's writing is full of details and immersive, about the story until the end it is well underway, the protagonist has not yet shown great things or potential to reach the level of the otsutsukis but the story is only at the beginning. Nowadays most Naruto fanfics are translations from Chinese, that is, they are of poor quality, this fanfic is one of the rare Naruto fanfics with quality

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I was even enjoying it but the author's writing is bad and difficult to read, but even worse is the absurd nerf that the author put on Itachi, a random Anbu can dodge Amaterasu while only the fourth Raikage has enough speed for that

for someone who cured cancer, the protagonist is a person with a terrible character, his protagonist is one of the most hypocritical MC I've ever read

author you are getting confused with the protagonist's name, it's either nawaki or noah