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Itas Adventure

Auteur: ITapan
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What is Itas Adventure

Lisez le roman Itas Adventure écrit par l'auteur ITapan publié sur WebNovel. Itas died and met god a got too many merits so he could choose ten wishes for donating his company for charitythis story is about how he uses his wishes and his adventure through ​Nobuna no Yabou worl...

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Itas died and met god a got too many merits so he could choose ten wishes for donating his company for charity this story is about how he uses his wishes and his adventure through ​Nobuna no Yabou world​ This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source material of Nobuna no Yabou. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existents of pre-existing characters or content or picture ---------------------------- Donation I'm an inspiring author who likes to create fan fiction with harem content and training to become good enough to create my world with my characters I Don't need money, but it will help with getting more time to focus on my stories. I'm not selling my content Patreaon: https://www.patreon.com/imatapans ---------------------------- Discord channel invite: https://discord.gg/5dyaagk ------------------------------- I don't want to fill my chapters with unnecessary things: Read latest news, schedule, and update at ITapan News (Just search for it) I'll try to keep it updated

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Xumit
XumitLv13Xumit

This is a dull story. The MC hasn't done anything significant. Too many useless OC characters. That's why i hate OC characters, it makes the story dull.

ITapan
ITapanAuteurITapan

Since many people does it, i tough why not. kkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkløøkkløkkkøkl

neobenmike
neobenmikeLv5neobenmike

Shitty grammar with wrong words used like treas(trees) and many more that I won't bother writing. 10 chapters in and minuscule improvement. Story so far isn't good (grammar is getting in the way, it makes things hard to imagine when the brain is trying to decipher what picture a sentence is trying to imply) I can't say anything much in regards to world building since there aren't any much chapter regarding the world, same with characters. The pace is slow I suggest the author should know more about all tenses(past, present, future), use of commas and double check that the words are the ones that is supposed to be used. Sentence construction and dialogue use, will have to be for the future. I won't be writing the other stuff I noticed as this is already long enough.

Terorrtown_131
Terorrtown_131Lv4Terorrtown_131

Good luck on ur first fanfic 👍🏽

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

author, if you are going to write other stories after this one, you can try (shinma mao no testament = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse)), I want to write a story of that anime, now that there aren't many, just that I can't think of how to start, or what a plot to put in. pdta: How would you start the story? If you had seen the anime, the manga, the novel.

GodharemZ
GodharemZLv13GodharemZ

This novel has a lot of potential !! THE THING IS THOU THIS IS A ONE OF A KIND NOVEL !! U PORBLEY CANT FIND ANOTHER ONE ! GIVE IT A TRY THE ANIME WAS GOOOOOD

Shallow_vernal
Shallow_vernalLv10Shallow_vernal

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DaoIsLife
DaoIsLifeLv12DaoIsLife

May this novel give you life.

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