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The System: Civilian Shinobi

DaoistWu007

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What is The System: Civilian Shinobi

The System: Civilian Shinobi is a popular fanfic written by the author DaoistWu007, covering SYSTEM, ACTION, NARUTO, ADVENTURE, Anime & Comics genres. It's viewed by 2M readers with an average rating of 4.69/5 and 136 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 69 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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The fate of elemental nations was controlled by a weird character named Zetsu. From Madara to Obito to pain, everything happened according to the plans of Zetsu. What would happen if an ordinary kid from a civilian family got a surprise morning message. [Good Morning Tobi!] [Welcome to the System!] ... AN- the first 7 chaps contain a lot of stats but I changed the writing style so you won't see much of them in the upcoming chapter so if you are put off by it...continue reading a few more chaps to give it another chance I know there may be some plot holes and spelling mistakes, but this is my first time writing so cut me some slack and support me... The first mission starts in chapter 20... If you want to read ahead or support me head to my Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/DaoistWu_007 Currently 23 chapters ahead and +1 or 2 chapter ahead per day! Alse if you wanna chat Join us on Discord! https://discord.gg/7VHcwnAwaN

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DaoistWu007
DaoistWu007AuthorDaoistWu007

As an author, it is my solemn duty to rate my novel as 5 stars...Do give it a read in your free time. I am probably not gonna copy canon except for the important arcs... I am trying to improve my writing skills and I hope you guys stick around... I'll end this as I always end my Author Notes!! Peace!!

Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5Harem_fan

I was kinda harsh on our poor author about game stats, and you know what he did? Thats right! He took it and made changes to the story like a champ! As of chapter 8 and 9 it has become more story than gaming stats and I gotta say it is a nice refreshing read. I do recommend you give this a try and have fun with it and do not be too serious!

DreamerTom
DreamerTomLv5DreamerTom

A full 5 stars from me for a starter. It's always nice to see a light-hearted proper shounen style NARUTO fanfic. especially when the MC is quite humorous himself. will be seeing how you make him progress in his ninja days and love life. I hope you don't pull the trauma trump crap and ruins the light-hearted mood. Thank you for this fanfic. P.S. don't forget to update your auxiliary chapters, especially the skill part.

ARN3wman
ARN3wmanLv3ARN3wman

honestly, this is just your run of the mill naruto fanfic. the system is absolutely broken and allows the MC to transcend all sensible boundaries. if you enjoy that type of thing, that this is your story. however, if you're looking for a good read where stuff makes sense, then I'd recommend looking elsewhere.

animadrop
animadropLv5animadrop

A solid 3 stars I dont like the forced comedic relief between the MC and the system and I also don't like the MC himself, or rather how he is written with the self-talking and the stupid (I know, he is a kid and all, but only stupid kids keep repeating the same mistakes over and over) things he does like the pranks on his family and the stupid lack of awareness he has. Now, enough of the stupid. I also really dislike that the system, and I dont mean the stupid character the author introduced as the system, but rather the real system, has become more or less irrelevant to the story. Yes, there are still levels, there is still the shop and everything: But! Has the Inventory ever been explained or made use of in the story? No Have the stat points been distributed or was it mentioned how the stats even work? Not really. Two small instances of "all to 50. And the rest to dex or agi" The levels are redundant, because we already know the ranks and they are enough to gauge someones prowess. Basically, the only reason the system even exists is to provide a crutch to the author (fucking systems with personalities, I hate them when they are not well done or integral to the story), and as an explanation for the MCs quick growth in power, including acquiring bloodlines. The quests? Irrelevant and redundant, since there are already village missions and the other missions were unnecessary. The stats? Who cares. Point already made Skills? You already got the point, although there was an attempt to make the system useful story-wise with the skills Now, I realize this was a rant, but I wanted to write this. This story started as a System story, but quickly turned into a story where the system has no place apart from annoying readers like me. And screw the aux chapter for the stats, that shit is hella annoying to look at every single chapter, not that that would make sense, since it *should be* kept up to date, so you won't even notice its existence unless you are waiting for new chaps.

Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5Harem_fan

⣿⣿⡆⠀⠀⢸⣷⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⢸⣿⡇⠀⠀⣾⣿⡆ ⣿⣿⡇⠀⠀⢸⣿⢰⣿⡆⠀⣾⣿⡆⠀⣾⣷ ⣿⣿⡇⠀⠀⣿⣿⡇ ⣿⣿⡇⠀⠀⢸⣿⠘⣿⣿⣤⣿⣿⣿⣤⣿⡇⢻⣿⡇⠀⠀⣿⣿⡇ ⣿⣿⡇⠀⠀⢸⡿⠀⢹⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠁⢸⣿⣇⠀⢀⣿⣿⠇ ⠙⢿⣷⣶⣶⡿⠁⠀⠈⣿⣿⠟⠀⣿⣿⠇⠀⠈⠻⣿⣶⣾⡿⠋ Chapter 39 was awesome.

Anubis_Creationz
Anubis_CreationzLv2Anubis_Creationz

Really good, can't wait for more. Early chapters are a little rough around the edges, but overall it's one of the better Naruto fics. Hope author san doesn't drop.

Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv3Ashmodai

Good work. My only recommendation is to use the naruto style ranking from E-S Rank (or SSS Rank for stuff like rinnegan) for Jutsus, Skills and mor instead of bronze, Silver,... Gives a better immersion for the Naruto Universe.

NattoMakki
NattoMakkiLv6NattoMakki

Its a good one. As he was start as civilian not a heir of clan. I wonder how it would go later as we all know the troblem on canon. Will his status as civilian become problem? Hmmm.....

Mobbingldust
MobbingldustLv5Mobbingldust

A pretty good fanfic which is different from the usual copy and paste fanfictions that are on the web , I just hope the author keep updating it and not drop it like many fanfics that had promise.

Enjoyteddy
EnjoyteddyLv5Enjoyteddy

The story is pretty solid so far. Easy to read and understand. The updates are stable so far and I hope it stays that way. I like the characters so far and I think the author is doing a great job keep it up!

CarrolStark
CarrolStarkLv3CarrolStark

good......,........ great......................... good......,........ great......................... good......,........ great.........................

natsudesai
natsudesaiLv3natsudesai

it doesn't feel like ninja. who heals enemies. he didn' t even have guts to tell ino to shutup. and the whole ninja thing going on I dunno he Will be ever a ninja. it's like little boys playing ninja. he should be dead by invasion.

Elder
ElderLv6Elder

Average realy average story. Don't get why it so high in power ranking. Probably because others not writing right now... And to tell the truth it's kind of boring for me already at chapter 19 so i probably read farther when i have nothing to read only.

Ashborn2271
Ashborn2271Lv3Ashborn2271

Hope it mc x kurenai, lets skip asuma, shes one of the hottest woman in naruto, otherwise the fic is going pretty good, tgough would recommend more seriousness from him, especially when he learns what konoha did to the uchiha and probably to the uzumaki, hope this isnt some hiruzen is grandfather while danzo is evil thing, id like a bit of evil action or ninja acts by hiruzen like letting the uzumaki die as he didnt have enough shinobis. hope the mc sees both sides of the world both the light and dark, and the middleground. we dint need another naruto. hope the mc becomes more grey

ryanryan
ryanryanLv4ryanryan

yes

Weaboi
WeaboiLv3Weaboi

This fanfic needs more love it is one of the best naruto fanfics i have read it is much better than a lot of ghe other naruto fanfics that make it all the way to the top of the popular list

Callmeilai_lol
Callmeilai_lolLv1Callmeilai_lol

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Devid00
Devid00Lv1Devid00

Its very good, plz dont drop [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Otherunkowen
OtherunkowenLv5Otherunkowen

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