LordHermes
I loved the whole story so far . I recommend everyone to read it. I liked how the author described each and every situation so magnificently. Every part of the chapter was very beautiful. As you keep reading this book, you become curious and the more you read it the more you enjoy it. Elated to read this book and I hope the next chapter comes soon <333
Iâll talk about the synopsis first. I like that itâs short, concise, and direct to the point. A synopsis doesnât have to be five pages long. I also like that the author included his update schedule though I would honestly prefer it to be daily. But anyway, letâs talk about the chapters. If I will have to describe it, itâs poetic. The author has a way with his words. One thing, the author had beautifully executed the âthree chapter ruleâ. With just reading the first three chaps, youâll already have an idea of how the story will proceed from thereon. Keep it up!! -bunnyrabbit
The story development is great, the grammar is solid, the description is much better than most Webnovel stories, and the narration is spectacular. Seriously, this story has the most entertaining narration I've seen in a while. I didn't notice any major flaws with this story, perhaps a few corrections have been made since others reviewed it. The only thing I might have held against you is there aren't enough updates, but I won't. Feel free to look at my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey".
I am writing this just so I can really talk about some stuff here. With this series, the inspiration behind it came from me wanting to escape reality. And I had dreams about fantasy type stories, so in the end I ended up putting all this in a google doc and boom. I am honestly glad at the progress I've made on this so far. At this point I have published chapter three and I can confirm that the series will evolve into something never seen before! Thank you for your support so far!