Straight to the point ha?
Exactly what I was thinking.
Appropriate response, would probably feel the same if I woke up in my fathers body lol
Rainwater makes sense, fruits won't give you enough water to survive for days. Adding a small line about that should be enough 👍
What about water?
You would think he would be more paranoid to drink anything after his father was just poisoned.
A poison for the soul, interesting.
I was bored at the start but this novel grow on me. I laughed out loud a couple of times and the character of the demon god is likable and fun so far. I find it kind of weird that his parents named him Lucifer like they knew he was a demon god. On top of that, how is he moving around and using magic when he is only months old? Even if he is a god, physically he is still just a baby. Overall I enjoyed this novel and may be back for more.
Remember to add a "." at the end of your sentences.
Not bad so far, the demon god's last words were hilarious.
I wonder if the historians will fabricate more glories last words for the demon king.
lol, I imagine him waving his hand and then ragdolling with a death scream.
Not a bad start. You have grammar mistakes here and there and some of your sentences are a bit too long. I do like the way you describe things so far, paints a clear enough picture. I would appreciate more descriptions of the surrounding. Overall, a good start.
*listen to the hunters
while I didn't read all the chapters yet, it is not bad so far. I really like your writing style, it is very deceptive. It paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind.