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Heya folks just a newbie coming here for ya all reviews over my novel do remember to comment down below your ideas about upcoming plot twists Current Novel: Oh My Demon Lord

2021-11-14 JoinedGlobal
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to Jasmine_Md

    thank you [img=recommend]

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    Oh My Demon Lord
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Posted

    the story's pace is good along with small chaps it's quite fun but i would surely suggest to use some grammar corrector app keep up the good work author

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    Pranking the Prank King
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to N_webnovel

    thank you dear

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    Oh My Demon Lord
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to restful_sins

    thank you

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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to Ice_Princesss

    thank you

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    Oh My Demon Lord
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Posted

    perfect world built although story is just starting but i like where its going, the characters are well defined and author has made the words into imagination keep it up author

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    Shatteredsoul Series
    Fantasy · restful_sins
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Posted

    very good story thus far i loved the plot twists although i donot read these types but it still kept me hooked till the end good work author make sure to update it regularly

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    A Devil Named Devotion
    Fantasy · Culmination
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Posted

    good story thus far, the mc is really good and the author sure has put some thought into this story surely gonna wait for more keep it up author

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    I Choose You For Eternity
    Fantasy · Wishful_thinker1
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to DyaAran

    even i laughed while writing it

    "Mm... That's me." He replied.
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    Oh My Demon Lord
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Posted

    good story thus far, gotta say that world is also described perfectly keep it up author gonna wait for next update[img=update][img=recommend]

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    Until I Say Your Name
    Fantasy · OneClaudia
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to MaxPower12

    thank you

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    Oh My Demon Lord
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to OneClaudia

    thank you

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    Oh My Demon Lord
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to DyaAran

    thanks a lot for motivation [img=recommend]

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    Oh My Demon Lord
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Commented

    so beautiful cover along with THE perfect prologue

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Blessed with the Moon
    Fantasy · DyaAran
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Posted

    most of the werewolf stories these days are sure cliche, but this one was a better option. the world's structure was properly described and the character design is also good just waiting for next chap

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    Blessed with the Moon
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to Cynical_Stranger

    okay i'll correct it

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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to Cynical_Stranger

    well according to the world settings everyone has to mourn for atleast 3 years but his mother started having affairs as soon as her husband died

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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Posted

    although the story is till not yet giving a feel but i still think it will turn out to be good, the world described is good and characters are also quite good will see the upcoming chaps for sure

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    8 The Infinite
    Fantasy · Cynical_Stranger
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  • immortal_shizu322
    immortal_shizu3222yr
    Replied to Cynical_Stranger

    alright i'll take a note to it

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