Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in The One-Man Army

The story development is great, the grammar is solid, the description is much better than most Webnovel stories, and the narration is spectacular. Seriously, this story has the most entertaining narration I've seen in a while. I didn't notice any major flaws with this story, perhaps a few corrections have been made since others reviewed it. The only thing I might have held against you is there aren't enough updates, but I won't. Feel free to look at my story "Avatar: Macai's Journey".