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Sjsnwhnxshsh1

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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh110mth
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    This is great. The beginning, which starts with a very, very vivid dream, pulls the reader straight into the plot. The intrigue is built up. The writing quality is commendable. Barely any mistakes. The character, Ly, is perfectly designed. Overall, Great job!

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    Young Master Adrian Of Winford
    Fantasy · LucienNg
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh110mth
    Replied to LucienNg

    Thanks! I've never used Webnovel on mobile, so I didn't know that would happen. I'll try it next time.

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    Lightwielder
    Fantasy · Sjsnwhnxshsh1
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh110mth
    Posted

    The story is completely captivating. The mystery involved adds intrigue. The writing quality is very good, and then world background is definitely developed. Kudos!

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    Princess of the Silver Ocean
    Fantasy Romance · Ice_Princesss
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh110mth
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    This is an absolutely fantastic novel. Honestly, this is THE best webnovel that I have read up to now. Everything is built to perfection. Kudos!!!

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    Until I Say Your Name
    Fantasy Romance · OneClaudia
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh110mth
    Posted

    The writing quality is fantastic. The world building is very novel. The story develops at a slow but captivating pace. The characters are very well distinguished, and their growth can already be shown in the two chapters that I read.

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    TRASHED, WILL NOT UPDATE ANYMORE
    Fantasy Romance · chery_cabral
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh110mth
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    This book was quite a nice read. There are mistakes with capitalization. The main character needs to be more relatable for readers. The plot is developing at a nice pace. Overall, good job!

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    Transmigration: From baby to teenager
    Contemporary Romance · Nerdy_Joker_101
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh110mth
    Posted

    Shameless review from author! This is my first WPC novel, so I'd appreciate every bit of feedback! Don't forget to vote for me and share! Thanks!!!

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    Shapeshifting Mayhem
    Fantasy · Sjsnwhnxshsh1
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh110mth
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    The story is wonderful. It is still quite new, with only three chapters. The description is detailed. The plot seems interesting. Good job!!!

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    The One-Man Army
    Fantasy Romance · LordHermes
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh110mth
    Posted

    The story is definitely interesting. However, there are lots of mistakes with the punctuation, and even basic capitalization. The plot and character design are commendable. Good job!

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    Man?Monster?God?
    Fantasy · LORDOFORIGINALINK
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh11yr
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    Shameless review from author! Just so you guys know, I'm attempting to do maybe a chapter every other day. However, because I'm a student, the schedule might not be regular... If you like it, add it to your library and share!

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    Lightwielder
    Fantasy · Sjsnwhnxshsh1
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh11yr
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    The story is good. It has solid background and the development is steady with hooks. However, the grammar isn't the best. Edit the work, and it will be much better.

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    then forgotten
    Fantasy · GentleFlame27
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh11yr
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    This story has a lot of grammatical errors. For example, using it's instead of its, and also lots of spelling mistakes. Editing them will definitely improve the reading experience. However, the plot is quite developed and the background is established. Apart from some of the small mistakes, Good Job!

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    BORN RULER: The Heavens are just my subordinates
    Fantasy · BrightBrain256
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh11yr
    Posted

    Hey! This is a nice story. However, there are some grammatical errors that if corrected, will definitely improve the story. all the rest is pretty good, especially the world background.

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    Ecto-Yaksh
    Fantasy · Reo_
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh11yr
    Posted

    Pretty good. Some more complex vocabulary would definitely improve the writing. The characters need to be more defined, but good luck and good job!

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    Quick Transmigration Of The Divine Phoenix
    Fantasy Romance · Naomi_qx
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh11yr
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    Hey! Your book is really interesting. However, I do see some grammatical mistakes, and further editing can definitely make the story better. The story development is very interesting, the suspense building very meticulous. Good Job!

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    The Elusive Book Keeper
    Magical Realism · Dark_Scholars
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  • Sjsnwhnxshsh1
    Sjsnwhnxshsh11yr
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    Shameless 5 star review from author... If you like this novel then please share... Thank you...................................................................

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    Cultivating in Another Dimension
    Fantasy · Sjsnwhnxshsh1
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