Interesting storyline and beautiful writing! The story reminds me of the HK tvb dramas of the police academy I've watched in my younger days. Author has done a good job expressing the thoughts and experiences of the characters through dialogue. I like the style of the writer! it's fun and easy to read!!
Excellent story! Style is very simple to read. Usage of words is easy to understand, author has done a good job in explaining the different divisions (classes) in the world. Good Job!
A great and thrilling story. Fascinating plot and vivid descriptions. The author has done a great job detailing and explaining scenes, fights and weaponry. Something interesting to read for me! I seldom read military but story is well planned and flow is perfect. Update: I realised the first 3 chapters I read is only about one of the characters! I can't wait to read about the others.
A great title!
first review! I love the idea behind the story!! it's exciting and can't wait to see how the story plays out. style is very smooth and easy to read. some minor grammatical errors here and there, but may be edited later on. I wish you best of luck with your story!! 🥰🥰
well I'm Chinese so it's not surprising. Dowager drowning her son's favourite concubine too.
The style is great, the storyline is amazing and I love how the story progresses. However, for this to be a honest review, I have to be completely honest. My suggestion to the writer is that there's a few grammatical errors, but don't be discouraged! You're doing a great job here! If you would like to share, do discord me. cheers and have a great day!
I guess so XD