Daisy_T
Well done, Author, The novel is a wonderful read! The Author is very imaginative and created a beautiful plot. The characters are dynamic and very emotive. The world created is detailed and the plot advances smoothly. I have found the story very interesting, and I hope the author continues writing. Well Done! The grammar can improve as there were a few mistakes. However, it is not enough to stop you from immersing in a great story. Great Job! I do want to see more of Penny! Added to the Library :)
It is a great story and since there are only seven chapters, I decided to read all of them instead. The paragraphs are good since I did not notice any lengthy and wordy ones. Aside from this, the word choice is absolutely brilliant to the point I can imagine everything that the author wants me to imagine. It tickles one's imagination so I highly suggest this. Aside from this, the plot is a bit fast(for me at least) but that is fine for me since the majority of the books here are fast-paced. I was able to imagine the looks of the characters in a few paragraphs so good job! I truly admire your work and wish you all the best!
The author has done a great work on writing the correct words at the perfect time. Let me tell, I am already thinking who the ML is...... Considering the few chapters that I read I am pretty sure that author can pull up all the mysteries. Keep updating author and give us such amazing stories. If anyone wants to decide to read it or not, I would suggest to just read first chapter and you won't be able to stop before you finish it.
Definitely my kind of novel, I'm super hooked. I loved it. I am already following it. I long wanted to read some sci-fiction like this. This is totally promising. The sneak peek was awesome and the flow of the plot is very interesting. I love Avi and Timmy, yes, they are hilarious. I can’t wait for more Penny moments and her growth. I loved the world and the fast pace, the suspense and action are intriguing. If you are looking for some enthralling story and fascinating characters, this you should read. Read!! Keep up the hard work author, can’t wait for more releases!!!
The book has an interesting story line and the author does a good job of incorporating detail into her writing that helps the reader picture whats going on. Contrast to the cover photo the novel holds a sci fi with its premise. The characters are distinct and are slowly building their profile in the novel. While there are some assumptions/abrupt information in the beginning chapters I believe it will make more sense as the chapters increase! All together, a good novel keep writing!!
Nice plot. The idea of this novel is very fresh, and the choice of words you use can be easily understood. It's a pretty enjoyable experience for me. Overall, this is a very promising book in my opinion. Nice work, Author! And it will be better if you update a bit more cause your curious readers will be thankful for it. Best of luck.
This is an interesting story, I was definitely hooked with the action right off the bat. I was a little thrown when the plot shifted away from the characters we were introduced to in the beginning, but by the last chapter available, the story was brought back around so that it all made sense how it went together. The author did a good job with the world building, though I do have quite a few questions. Hopefully they will be answered as the story develops and more chapters are posted.
It's an interesting story where our MC is a Mutant... Yes she's a Mutant. I've read story about zombies, wizards, vampires and werewolves but it's first time I'm reading a story about mutant. I'm really eager to know what power Penny have and how she will survive against Dev with her group of friends. Author had done a great job, writing is good and easy to understand. Characters and background is defined beautifully. It's a something new and deserve a try so do read it Good luck author. Waiting for more chapters to come.....😊