Thank you so much, that means a lot! <3
Thank you for the kind review! I see where you're coming from on the long paragraphs, I'll make sure I add more breaks in it. Thanks for pointing that out!
Author here! The who's face she looked at bit references the old superstition that you bad luck was related to the first face you saw in the morning.
Its a pity there isn't many chapters to fo off of but its really well written! The author does a great job of introducing the characters & the world background. Highly recommend this as a read!
This is a really good novel, very well written and draws you in by the dog blood portion of a beginning. It feels very Cinderella but the author adds her own unique twists that make it distinct. Good job, hoping for more chapters!
why he marry her then bro
she'll prob have a secret will or something
I'm sensing Cinderella vibes
correction to "shriek" here
cause it was bb