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MokouFriedChicken

MokouFriedChicken

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Just another random voice with crappy wrists on the interwebs. I promise nothing and deliver even less. Bug me on Twitter: @FriedMokou Bug me on Discord: https://discord.gg/NZA6Jun

2019-01-11 JoinedPhilippines
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken3mth
    Posted

    A good start. The plot is a breath of fresh air compared to a lot of transmigration stories out there. The current short length might put you off now, but it's just starting, yes? And Author said that they already have the entirety of Volume 1 written out as well, so I'll be looking forward to that

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    This is a Beta Test?! - A Literally Broken System
    Video Games · ChellyArks
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Replied to tfcuhb

    Glad you liked it

    Ch 12 III.III Leveling Up?
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    Well that was fast. Tastefully done scenes aside, the flowery prose in display here is well done. Scenes are painted beautifully and the world is being filled out nicely. Would recommend.

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    REMOVED!!
    Fantasy Romance · PinkLemons
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    This is pretty well written. While I don't read in this type of genre, I can still appreciate the level of skill in display here. The Author certainly has a way with words, and the flowery prose is really what sells it for me.

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    The To-Do List
    LGBT+ · Dark_Scholars
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    How curious. The world building is very intriguing, and the way it opens in the prologue leaves just enough to make you want to read more. It just has that kind of atmosphere that really lingers as you read.

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    MORTAL GODS: Enouka
    Fantasy Romance · SpilledInk
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    How novel. Such an interesting concept. The execution is fairly good, and just... it's so unique that I just want to see where it goes. The quality writing just makes it all the better.

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    A Writer's Deadline
    Fantasy · meixiaolian
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Replied to meixiaolian

    Thanks for the review

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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    How curious. The self-aware NPC trope is kind of rare in this world, and this work seems to be pulling it off rather well. I like the lead so far, and will look forward to seeing how this goes.

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    NPC Code: Red Riding Hood
    Fantasy Romance · kuhaku_sora
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Replied to kuhaku_sora

    Thanks for the review 🙂

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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    Well, that was pretty exciting. I've written in this genre myself, and I have a lot to learn from your work. From the way you build the world, to the way you weave the tension and mystery, it's really top-notch. Dialogue flows well too, with minimal grammar mistakes. Then again, that's really nitpicking. Keep on writing

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    중단
    Fantasy · _hestia_
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Replied to TaintedMetal

    Thanks for the review. Hope I won't dissapoint moving forward.

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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    Good show. Characterization and world building is excellently done. It's vivid to read and novel enough that it's keeping me interested. Dialogue is also natural in it's flow. Keep on writing

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    The Man Who Loved Snakes
    Fantasy · TaintedMetal
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    Good show. The concept is well enough. Characters are relatable and the dialogue is solid. Prose might be a tad windy, however, but not really enough to detract from the story. Keep on writing.

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    The Dream Saga
    Fantasy · wookie0_
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    It's pretty well written. Writing is solid, as well as prose and dialogue. Everything flows smoothly enough, and the characters are likeable. Keep on writing.

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    Work has been licensed to POPINK
    Fantasy Romance · Proteety_Promi
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Replied to BerriApplepi

    Kindly pay me through GCash 🤣

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    The Devil who devoured Snow White
    Contemporary Romance · BerriApplepi
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  • MokouFriedChicken
    MokouFriedChicken1yr
    Posted

    You know the drill. It's good. It has the standard seal of quality as expected of the ever illustrious Miss Author. Will read more later. *Payment Recieved...* To anyone curious, it's an inside joke.

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    The Devil who devoured Snow White
    Contemporary Romance · BerriApplepi
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