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bibiyenini

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If you are here to read my mystery/thriller books, be ready to crack your brain open and guess the killer out of my character's investigations.

2020-07-24 JoinedPhilippines
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini20h
    Replied to Rosie_00007

    Hmmmm better check out on the later chapters. You'll find out what will happen.

    Ch 124 Before His Transfer
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    When I Was Your Beloved
    Contemporary Romance · bibiyenini
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini7d
    Replied to Rosie_00007

    it will end around 200-250 chapters.

    Ch 118 Hopeless Romantic
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    When I Was Your Beloved
    Contemporary Romance · bibiyenini
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini11d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 Immortality
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    Immortality's Weakness
    Fantasy · xxflorangelxx
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini12d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 The First Day
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    Transmigrated Mind
    Fantasy · Praefactuss
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini23d
    Replied to Rosie_00007

    Assuring you she will have a happy ending hehe.

    Ch 99 Hassle
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    When I Was Your Beloved
    Contemporary Romance · bibiyenini
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini23d
    Replied to listlesslemon

    I think around 250-300 dear, hehe.

    Ch 102 Take Away
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    When I Was Your Beloved
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini1mth
    Replied to Rosie_00007

    Ahhh it's only a few words hehe. Sorry for that.

    Ch 86 What Happened?
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    When I Was Your Beloved
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini1mth
    Replied to Rosie_00007

    It is to help the writers to earn. You can purchase coins to buy the chapters so that you can finish the story. It is a win-win situation for both of us. Thank you for understanding.

    Ch 49 I Want You To Be Happy
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    When I Was Your Beloved
    Contemporary Romance · bibiyenini
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini4mth
    Posted

    For a fantasy book with a mage and nature elements, I can see a lot of potential on first sight. The four elements chose Mi Young, and I would say that it's a savage thing I saw. Everyone loved this kind of girl power stories everywhere, and you got me there. However, there are good points and things to improve that I wanted to point out. Good points: 1) Having an independent woman brings me back to the story of Divergent series, a dystopian novel that depicts a woman that wanted to change her element. 2) The first three chapters really do a great portrayal of what the story really is. 3) The title speak for itself. You just have to read the synopsis and the first chapter, and that's a good thing. Things to improve: 1) The cover couldn't seem to attract an intriguing element I wanted to find inside your story. 2) The synopsis looks well, but it doesn't have the BRIEF overview of what the story really about. 3) You could improve the descriptions more. Overall, your story has the potential the way it is. There's always a room for improvement, and yours will do good here on Webnovel too. Good luck with the competition!

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    The Unsurpassed Maiden
    Fantasy Romance · yourghostwriter
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini4mth
    Commented

    being called Mr. Fool is hilarious 😂

    "It's our honor, Mr. Fool." Alger stood up as well. He bent his back slightly with his right palm over his chest.
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    Lord of Mysteries
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini4mth
    Posted

    Depicts another fantasy world came from the author's imaginative world. Who would have thought that the title speaks for itself. Being with an idiot is kinda scary for me. Though, a few good points adhered to this review. These are the good points: 1) The title seemed to speak for itself. 2) The story unfolds in a way that you didn't expect it. 3) The world background is imaginable, you could see yourself inside a book while transmigrating. However, in the goo points I've seen, there are rooms for improvement: 1) the synopsis lack something. The elements of the FL, ML, the design and the world background are all set. The intriguing perspective of the synopsis needs to be there. 2) Provoking emotions through the cover. The cover seems good for me, okay with my sight. Don't settle with a mediocre cover, unless your book could give a tremendous impact. I have read the chapters of your book. It could give much potential to our web novel viewers. But of course, in order to improve, you need to learn. Successful novels cannot get overnight. It takes perseverance and determination to get there. Hope this review helped you. Good luck! :>

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    I Wrote a Poem and Now I'm Stuck in Another World with an Idiot.
    Fantasy · Andry_Reyes
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini4mth
    Posted

    This story holds so much potential at first sight. However, upon reading the first chapters of the novel, there are some points I need to elaborate for improvement. After all, the room for improvement is right around the corner. Island of Memories; the title alone is a clickbait. As we all know, memories are everyone's weakness for love. In this story, I can decipher that the love between the leads is exceptional. The good points I have seen were: 1) The one-liner synopsis has an intriguing element that will make the readers attentive with the story. 2) The first chapter depicted the relationship between the FL with the ML inside the coffee shop. You could see that their ill-fated relationship is something that the readers wanted to know more in the newest chapters. There are things that are need of improvement: 1) The synopsis meant to have an overview of the novel. The one liner is good, but it lacked elements of explanation of what is the theme of the novel itself. 2) The redundancy and usage of dialogue tags. Usually, we use dialogue tags to provoke the statements of the character itself. Using "said" "asked" "shouted" repeated consistently all throughout the chapters. I suggest improving the use of other tags to embark emotions further. 3) Punctuations. The punctuations after dialogue tag should be in a comma form. Ex. "I'm inside the coffee shop," the girl mumbled. You could opt to split sentences which are hard to read. Ex. "I'm inside the coffee shop. I need to buy some coffee there." The girl mumbled in a low voice. She turned around to push the glass door behind her. These are the improvements I took down with the knowledge I have learned all throughout. Either way, you did a good job with your first chapters. You just need to nitpick everything and see if it fits the right emotions for your characters. Overall, you did a good job with your first novel!

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    ISLAND OF MEMORIES
    Teen · AJONAFXX
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini4mth
    Replied to Mandage_Tippett

    i didn't notice it, I'll fix it immediately. I apologize for a nuisance I made from your reading. I must have doubled it without even noticing. Hope you understood.

    Ch 16 He Doesn't Remember Me (II)
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    When I Was Your Beloved
    Contemporary Romance · bibiyenini
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini4mth
    Replied to Mandage_Tippett

    what do you mean repeated?

    Ch 16 He Doesn't Remember Me (II)
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    When I Was Your Beloved
    Contemporary Romance · bibiyenini
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini4mth
    Replied to DaoistpVvXxl

    it's the time before the accident, take note of that.

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    When I Was Your Beloved
    Contemporary Romance · bibiyenini
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini4mth
    Replied to Sam_Anthony_0775

    sorry, that was a typo, it meant 'cocooned'

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    When I Was Your Beloved
    Contemporary Romance · bibiyenini
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini4mth
    Posted

    There was something I would say to this book that is out of the league and had the feels on being a loose adaptation of a Korean Drama. Good points I saw: 1) a tearjerker scene at the first chapter. Yes, even readers and watchers will be intrigued by this kind of interaction. 2) the synopsis will be a slice of life of writers out there, especially us. It's something we look up for on a realistic or romance genre, the reality of life. Points to improve: 1) I was confused with the title, is it necessary to have 'By Uae Hexley'? 2) Unclear usage of the title Limerence, what was it? How did it became the title and so on? make sure to be straight on point when you title a novel. 3) Vague parts on the overview/synopsis, what will be the story hold? What will be the story all about? These are the points I want to convey and say, after all, you are doing a great job! Make sure you write everyday so that you can improve more! Don't be down with my review! (and don't hate me!)

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    Limerence by Uae Huxley
    Contemporary Romance · Uae
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini5mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    When I Was Your Beloved
    Contemporary Romance · bibiyenini
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini5mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Begin
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    Danger Zone [BL]
    LGBT+ · docaqui
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  • bibiyenini
    bibiyenini6mth
    Posted

    Surprise by how the premise had gone through in an impactful way I never knew it would. This historical romance could actually soar high up on the top rankings in consistent world background and characterization of it! Good job, author!

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    Somniate: Rise of the Faey Queen
    Fantasy Romance · yu_chan_desu
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