!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!! work on spellings

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!! but perhaps, work on some grammatical mistakes.

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

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wow nice to see u here! im such a fan of the mafia cinderella wants the crown

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!!!

hi, !!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

very lovely ztory. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling.

I think you are a very very very talented writer and you really know how to weave your words intricately to achieve a feel and tone. plus your characters really shine through. <3

Really amazing lore that sucks you in from the first page, like someone else said in the comments (i agree). I feel like you're headed in the right direction. keep it up!

As a kpop fan, I really enjoyed this one. It's quite interesting, keeps you intrigued and doesn't drag on for too long in chapters which i really really appreciate. nice work.

Though I think your work needs editing, this story is quite lovely. I really like the characters, the main one is nice enough and the world is very intriguing. Nice job.