Well done, Author, The novel is a wonderful read! The Author is very imaginative and created a beautiful plot. The characters are dynamic and very emotive. The world created is detailed and the plot advances smoothly. I have found the story very interesting, and I hope the author continues writing. Well Done! The grammar can improve as there were a few mistakes. However, it is not enough to stop you from immersing in a great story. Great Job! I do want to see more of Penny! Added to the Library :)
Daisy_T
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LIKEYou have done a great job with so many aspects in this novel, grammar will come over time.. do on to worry! Keep up the good work!
Daisy_T:Thank you very muchđ...I really needed that boost of confidence, cause it got to a point that I didn't know what I was doing anymore.... I'll try to get the grammar right in the coming chapters..... I really appreciate it!!!!đ
GloriouslyFamous:You have done a great job with so many aspects in this novel, grammar will come over time.. do on to worry! Keep up the good work!