Amateur writer, with a lot of love for reading novels, writing stuff of my yawning imagination, eating chocolates, and my dog. IG: @yawningbrain1 Discord: YawningBrain#6486
Great author! This is a beautiful novel. From the first chapter, the words and well crafted descriptions help me immerse into the main lead's thoughts and emotions. That said, the character design is truly well done in this one, I even felt that, Marco as the Main Lead, can lead the story with only his inner thoughts. The writing quality is excellent, with great fluidity. My only hope is that there would be more chapters. Excellent work!
I love how this novel was crafted, the theme, the world background and the descriptions. It is so worthwhile reading it. I was truly impressed, author. From the beginning, I couldn't stop reading, the action scenes were quite impressive. I can say that you really have a way with words, I mean, I could imagine the world you created with great detail. Amazing. Five stars! I will keep your story in my library!
Good and promising novel. The character design is very well thought and the flow of the story is quite engaging. I love how the world background was done here, the author has a great imagination. I only have a little qualm, just some grammar edits here and there. But overall, the story has great potential. 😊
Great! This was an impressive story, I love how the action and the characters are well built in every scene. The descriptive words and dialogues guides you through the world with great fluidity, and, at the same time, it is certainly entertaining. I really wish there were more chapters because I am curious on how this Great Voyager will turn out to be. I am liking her cool personality. Grammars and writing quality is top-notch too. Goodness! Please update more... It really left me hanging there... 😊😊
This is getting good
Yes, I am preparing to release some chapters.
I loved this novel! This was such a great read, author. I love the humor and the flow of the story, even the narration, and the dialogues were on point. I got hooked from the first chapters and I enjoyed it greatly. Well done, I will, for certain, leave this story in my library craving for more.😊
What a great read we have here! Detailed and well constructed. I read many of the chapters and I can tell it has a great pace and interesting plot. It can hook you right away with the good narration and the flow of the words. I am in awe, author! Keep up the good job, I will keep your story in my library for sure. 😊