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YawningBrain

YawningBrain

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An amateur writer with a lot of love for reading novels, writing stuff of my absurd yawning imagination, crazy about chocolates, and my dog. Discord: YawningBrain#6486 https://ko-fi.com/yawningbrain

2018-06-11 JoinedGlobal
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain18d
    Replied to Nr_Yet1208

    Yes, I am preparing to release some chapters.

    "This is a mistake," Tammy was now in a big dilemma, a cruel and complicated dilemma and, of course, a difficult moment.
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    The Duke鈥檚 Impossible Adoration
    Contemporary RomanceYawningBrain
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Posted

    I loved this novel! This was such a great read, author. I love the humor and the flow of the story, even the narration, and the dialogues were on point. I got hooked from the first chapters and I enjoyed it greatly. Well done, I will, for certain, leave this story in my library craving for more.馃槉

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    Capture A Husband: My Asian Mother's Quest
    Contemporary RomanceJyojiko
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented

    hahahaha馃ぃ馃ぃ馃ぃ

    He didn't finish his sentence for she suckered punch the jerk! "Have you forgotten how your blood is rainbow in screaming neon color!"
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    Capture A Husband: My Asian Mother's Quest
    Contemporary RomanceJyojiko
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented
    I鈥檒l Give You My Lamborghini
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    Capture A Husband: My Asian Mother's Quest
    Contemporary RomanceJyojiko
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented

    Interesting start!

    Ch 1 You Must Marry!
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    Capture A Husband: My Asian Mother's Quest
    Contemporary RomanceJyojiko
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Posted

    What a great read we have here! Detailed and well constructed. I read many of the chapters and I can tell it has a great pace and interesting plot. It can hook you right away with the good narration and the flow of the words. I am in awe, author! Keep up the good job, I will keep your story in my library for sure. 馃槉

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    LUCIFER'S BANE
    Fantasy RomanceAnittah
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Replied to Blue_pizza

    Thank you for your review 馃槈 I am also enjoying your novel.

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    The Magician Queen
    Fantasy RomanceYawningBrain
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Replied to Jo_J

    Thani you!

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    The Magician Queen
    Fantasy RomanceYawningBrain
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Posted

    I loved it! The way you constructed the plot is well paced and kept me hanging with every chapter I read. I love the story development and the character design, truly descriptive and immersive. Funny at times and can rill out emotions. Great Job author! I will keep this story in my library.

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    Anemones
    Contemporary RomanceJo_J
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented

    Take that!

    鈥淚 am pleased to introduce Alice McNielsen, the new chief editor!鈥 Announced Nicholas with an emphasis on 鈥榗hief editor鈥.
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    Anemones
    Contemporary RomanceJo_J
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented

    Great, this is an engaging start.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Anemones
    Contemporary RomanceJo_J
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented
    He clearly remembered her first day at work in the editorial office, almost minute by minute. He remembered every move, every gesture, every word she said.
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    Anemones
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented

    He is doing pretty well, though... 馃槈

    He changed the music a few times. He hesitated between classic and her favorite progressive rock. He looked through all the Pink Floyd CDs, Genesis, Camel and Wishbone Ash looking for something that would better suit this occasion. Finally, he turned on her favorite Hans Zimmer film scores. He didn't like it that much, but what would you do to impress a woman?
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    Anemones
    Contemporary RomanceJo_J
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented

    Hungry!

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    Anemones
    Contemporary RomanceJo_J
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Posted

    Author, I really like your story, the great detail in the world building and the inner thoughts of the MC are quite impressive. I can feel myself see the world through the eyes of MC as he kept going through the story. He is so analytical and his inner thinking keeps the tension and the emotions. Good job author! I will keep your story in my library.[img=recommend]

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    Specimen One
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented

    oh my! cliffhanger already. I love how he analyzes everything

    Ch 2 Chapter Two
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    Specimen One
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented

    Gooe chapter, I like how it is very descriptive and building up the tension.馃檪

    Ch 1 Chapter One
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    Specimen One
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Posted

    Good job author! The story has a lot of potential, and it is beautifully written. I love the detailed descriptions and the poetic vibes on some paragraphs. I can see you put a lot of thought in the story plot, the world background and the character design. I can only say that I am truly impressed. Keep up with the amazing job! I am adding it to my library.

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    Silver Snow
    Fantasy RomanceBlue_pizza
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Posted

    Great story author! I am impressed with the fluidity of the plot and the action scenes. Even the dialogues are right on point. I like the world background and how well you describe it to entice the readers to know more about it. The MC is so cool and well designed. I truly immersed myself in the story, so much that I continued reading the next chapters without stopping. Fascinating and addictive. Amazing!

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    The Man Who Loved Snakes
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  • YawningBrain
    YawningBrain1mth
    Commented

    This was good, really good, author

    Ch 1 Just some Exercise
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    The Man Who Loved Snakes
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