An amateur writer with a lot of love for reading novels, writing stuff of my absurd yawning imagination, crazy about chocolates, and my dog. Discord: YawningBrain#6486 https://ko-fi.com/yawningbrain
Yes, I am preparing to release some chapters.
I loved this novel! This was such a great read, author. I love the humor and the flow of the story, even the narration, and the dialogues were on point. I got hooked from the first chapters and I enjoyed it greatly. Well done, I will, for certain, leave this story in my library craving for more.😊
What a great read we have here! Detailed and well constructed. I read many of the chapters and I can tell it has a great pace and interesting plot. It can hook you right away with the good narration and the flow of the words. I am in awe, author! Keep up the good job, I will keep your story in my library for sure. 😊
I loved it! The way you constructed the plot is well paced and kept me hanging with every chapter I read. I love the story development and the character design, truly descriptive and immersive. Funny at times and can rill out emotions. Great Job author! I will keep this story in my library.
He is doing pretty well, though... 😉
Author, I really like your story, the great detail in the world building and the inner thoughts of the MC are quite impressive. I can feel myself see the world through the eyes of MC as he kept going through the story. He is so analytical and his inner thinking keeps the tension and the emotions. Good job author! I will keep your story in my library.[img=recommend]
Good job author! The story has a lot of potential, and it is beautifully written. I love the detailed descriptions and the poetic vibes on some paragraphs. I can see you put a lot of thought in the story plot, the world background and the character design. I can only say that I am truly impressed. Keep up with the amazing job! I am adding it to my library.
Great story author! I am impressed with the fluidity of the plot and the action scenes. Even the dialogues are right on point. I like the world background and how well you describe it to entice the readers to know more about it. The MC is so cool and well designed. I truly immersed myself in the story, so much that I continued reading the next chapters without stopping. Fascinating and addictive. Amazing!